Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
No I don't like make a list because my MBTI is ENTP so I'm not a people who always make a list. I like to do something just with my imagine.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
When I was a child I tried to make a list but it's not improve my my work so I give up this image and the test say my MBTI is ENTP so I don't like make a list.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
Because some people think make a list is very difficult and it doesn't enhance the work. Therefore they don't like to make a list just like me.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I don't like to make a list, but if you want me to make a list, I prefer the paper one. I think it's more efficient and the paper is everywhere. So I just have a pen and paper and I can make a list.
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 60.0提案: 你的回答中语法错误较多,表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和冠词的使用,同时避免重复表达。可以简洁明了地说明不喜欢列清单的原因,并用具体细节支持。
例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to rely on my memory and imagination. I find it more flexible and spontaneous that way.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题,说明是否制作工作清单,并解释原因。避免无关信息,保持句子简洁。
例: I used to try making lists for work when I was younger, but I found they didn't help me improve, so I stopped using them.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式,说明原因时用具体例子或理由支持观点。
例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and believe it doesn't really help them work more efficiently.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答较为完整,但表达可以更自然流畅。建议注意句子结构,避免重复,使用连接词使表达更连贯。
例: Although I don't usually make lists, if I have to, I prefer using paper because it's convenient and I always have a pen and paper handy.
× I'm not a people who always make a list.
✓ I'm not a person who always makes a list.
people 是复数形式,前面用不定冠词 a 不合适,应该用单数 person。并且主语是单数 person,谓语动词要用第三人称单数形式 makes。
× I don't like make a list because my MBTI is ENTP so I'm not a people who always make a list.
✓ I don't like making a list because my MBTI is ENTP so I'm not a person who always makes a list.
动词 like 后面接动名词 making 而不是动词原形 make。
× When I was a child I tried to make a list but it's not improve my my work so I give up this image and the test say my MBTI is ENTP so I don't like make a list.
✓ When I was a child I tried to make a list but it didn't improve my work so I gave up this idea and the test said my MBTI is ENTP so I don't like making a list.
过去时态中,否定句用 didn't improve,give up 和 say 也要用过去式 gave up 和 said。image 用词不当,应该是 idea。like 后面接动名词 making。
× I don't like make a list.
✓ I don't like making a list.
动词 like 后面应接动名词 making,而不是动词原形 make。
× some people think make a list is very difficult and it doesn't enhance the work.
✓ some people think making a list is very difficult and it doesn't enhance work.
think 后面接动名词 making。work 前面不需要加定冠词 the。
× I give up this image and the test say my MBTI is ENTP so I don't like make a list.
✓ I gave up this idea and the test said my MBTI is ENTP so I don't like making a list.
give up 后面接名词 idea,image 用词不当。动词 say 用过去式 said。like 后面接动名词 making。
× I don't like to make a list, but if you want me to make a list, I prefer the paper one.
✓ I don't like to make a list, but if you want me to make a list, I prefer the paper one.
此句无明显代词错误,保持原句。