List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need to buy. In addition, making a list allows me to manage my budget more efficiently as I can avoid buying unnecessary items.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes, I usually make alerts from both my work and study because it helps me stay organized and manage my time better. For example, I write down all the tasks I need to do each day, which makes it easier to focus and finish everything on time.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
I think some people don't like making this because they feel it time consuming and takes away from actually doing taxi. Also some people prefer to keep sitting in their memory rather than writing them down.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I prefer to make a list on my. I usually use the apps called Reminder to type down what I need to do each day.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 90.0提案: 你的回答很自然且內容完整，但可以稍微簡化句子結構，使表達更流暢。例如，避免使用過多連接詞，讓句子更直接。
例: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me remember what I need and manage my budget by avoiding unnecessary purchases.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答中有語言使用不自然的地方，例如“make alerts”應改為“make lists”或“set reminders”。建議使用更準確的詞彙，並保持句子簡潔。
例: Yes, I usually make lists for both work and study because they help me stay organized and manage my time better. For example, I write down all my daily tasks to focus and complete them on time.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中有語法錯誤和用詞不當，如“making this”應為“making lists”，“takes away from actually doing taxi”不清楚。建議加強語法和用詞準確性，並提供更具體的理由。
例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to rely on their memory instead of writing things down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中有語句不完整和拼寫錯誤，如“on my.”應補充完整，且“Reminder”應為“Reminders”。建議注意完整句子結構和正確拼寫。
例: I prefer to make lists on my phone. I usually use the app called Reminders to type what I need to do each day.
文法
× I think some people don't like making this because they feel it time consuming and takes away from actually doing taxi.
✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it is time-consuming and takes away from actually doing tasks.
The original sentence uses 'this' incorrectly instead of 'lists' (plural noun), which is more appropriate here. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective. 'Taxi' seems to be a typo and should be 'tasks'. The sentence also lacks the verb 'is' after 'feel it'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.
× Also some people prefer to keep sitting in their memory rather than writing them down.
✓ Also, some people prefer to keep things in their memory rather than writing them down.
The phrase 'keep sitting in their memory' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'keep things in their memory'. 'Sitting' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Adding a comma after 'Also' improves sentence flow.
× I prefer to make a list on my.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.
The sentence is incomplete; 'my' is a possessive pronoun that requires a noun to complete the phrase. Adding 'phone' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.
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