List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and includes filler words like 'Umm'. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy by combining ideas smoothly. Also, use linking words to connect your points naturally.

例: Yes, I usually make a list for grocery shopping because it helps me remember what to buy and find items quickly.

提案: Avoid asking for repetition unless necessary, and try to answer directly. Also, avoid repetition of words like 'helps help helps'. Use complete sentences and link your ideas clearly.

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and manage my tasks efficiently.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Avoid vague phrases like 'task addition' and incomplete thoughts like 'lists are and add analysis'. Provide clear reasons with proper vocabulary and linking words.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find them restrictive and prefer a more spontaneous way to organise their tasks. Additionally, they may feel that lists cause overthinking.

提案: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Try to answer directly which method you prefer and explain why, using clear sentences and linking words. Avoid incomplete or unclear phrases.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient, but sometimes I use a paper calendar at work to plan my tasks for the next day.

× Sorry, could you please repeat the question if you are? If you are asking whether I make a list for my work, then yes, I usually do making a list. Helps help helps me stay organized.

✓ Sorry, could you please repeat the question? If you are asking whether I make a list for my work, then yes, I usually do make a list. It helps me stay organized.

The phrase 'I usually do making a list' is incorrect because 'do' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. The correct form is 'I usually do make a list.' Also, the fragment 'Helps help helps me stay organized' is unclear and should be corrected to 'It helps me stay organized' to form a complete sentence.

× Some people dislike making this because they find it restrictive and prefer a more spontaneous approach to organizing their task addition. Additionally, some may feel that lists are and add analysis.

✓ Some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer a more spontaneous approach to organizing their tasks. Additionally, some may feel that lists are an added analysis.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrectly used; it should be 'lists' to refer to the subject. The phrase 'task addition' is unclear and should be 'tasks.' The sentence 'lists are and add analysis' is incomplete and likely intended as 'lists are an added analysis' or similar. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I usually do both if I am at the hospital doing my job. In my table I have a calendar with columns so I can know the things or I can make a list for tomorrow in that calendar if I am.

✓ I usually do both if I am at the hospital doing my job. On my table, I have a calendar with columns so I can note the things or make a list for tomorrow in that calendar if I am there.

The preposition 'In my table' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'On my table' because items are placed on surfaces. Also, 'I can know the things' is awkward; 'I can note the things' or 'I can write down the things' is better. Adding 'if I am there' completes the sentence logically.