List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答时态使用不准确，应该使用一般现在时来描述习惯行为。此外，句子结构较简单，缺少连接词使表达不够流畅。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并加入连接词丰富内容。

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember all the items I need to buy.

提案: 回答内容较为简单，缺少具体细节和连接词。建议在回答中加入更多具体原因和连接词，使表达更连贯且内容更丰富。

例: Yes, I often make a list for my work because it helps me keep track of my tasks, and as a result, I can concentrate better and improve my productivity.

提案: 语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用完整句子，注意主谓一致，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it annoying; for example, they prefer to rely on their memory instead.

提案: 句子结构较为简单且有语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议合并句子，使用连接词，并注意介词使用，使表达更自然。

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I use it every day, and the items I write are clearly visible and easy to check.

× Yes I did. I make a list when I was shopping.

✓ Yes, I did. I made a list when I was shopping.

这里的动作发生在过去，所以动词需要用过去式。原句中 'make' 应改为过去式 'made'。

× Because they think make lists is annoying.

✓ Because they think making lists is annoying.

动词 'make' 在这里作为动名词使用，应该用动名词形式 'making'。

× I prefer to make a list of my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.

表示在某物上做某事，应该用介词 'on'，而不是 'of'。

× I can look what I write on my phone, it will be clearly visible.

✓ I can look at what I write on my phone; it will be clearly visible.

动词 'look' 后面需要介词 'at' 来引导宾语。