List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中时态使用不准确，且表达不够自然。建议使用一般现在时描述习惯行为，并避免重复表达。

例: I don't often make a list when I shop because I usually buy things spontaneously.

提案: 句子结构混乱，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，使用正确时态和连词，明确表达观点。

例: I sometimes make a list for my work or homework, but it doesn't always help because I usually don't follow it.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但缺少连接词使句子衔接不够流畅。建议使用连接词如"because"或"so"来增强逻辑性。

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel restricted and prefer to do things spontaneously.

提案: 语法错误较多，表达不完整，句子不连贯。建议注意动词形式和句子完整性，使用连词使表达更流畅。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easier to carry and I can change my list whenever I want.

× I didn't make the list very often.

✓ I don't make a list very often.

这里的时间状语是一般现在时，表示经常性的行为，所以应该用一般现在时态，而不是过去时。

× I sometimes make a list for the for my work or for the homework, but it doesn't.

✓ I sometimes make a list for my work or for my homework, but it doesn't.

这里多了一个多余的介词“the”，应去掉以符合正确的介词用法。

× Make results very often as I didn't follow the list usually.

✓ It doesn't work very often as I don't usually follow the list.

句子时态应与上下文保持一致，描述习惯性行为应使用一般现在时，而不是过去时。

× I prefer make a list on the phone as as the phone is more easily to carry than the paper and I can.

✓ I prefer to make a list on the phone as the phone is easier to carry than paper and I can

动词prefer后应接不定式to make；形容词easy的比较级是easier，且后面接动词时用不定式；去掉多余的重复词“as”。

× Change my list very often without.

✓ change my list very often without any problem.

句子不完整，缺少宾语或补充说明，需补充完整表达。