List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“what's the things”应为“what things”，且“shows to others”表达不准确。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，同时注意语法正确。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember the items I need to buy and also lets others know what I want to get.

提案: 回答过于简短且缺乏具体理由，表达不够自然。建议给出更详细的解释，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

例: No, I don't usually make lists for my work because I prefer to keep things in my mind, and I find that lists don't help me stay organized effectively.

提案: 回答语法混乱，逻辑不清，且内容与问题不符。建议先明确回答问题，再用具体理由支持，注意句子结构和逻辑连贯。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory and feel that lists are unnecessary or time-consuming.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误，如“on my”缺少名词，“look my list”应为“look at my list”。建议完整表达观点并注意语法。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can access them anywhere and it's more convenient than using paper.

× Yes I do because the list can help me remember what's the things I want to buy and it is a good way to shows to others what I want to bring.

✓ Yes, I do because the list can help me remember the things I want to buy and it is a good way to show others what I want to bring.

这里的错误是名词单复数问题。'what's the things'中'what's'是'what is'的缩写，后面接复数名词'things'不匹配，应去掉'is'。另外，'shows'应改为原形动词'show'，因为主语是单数名词'way'，后面用不带s的动词不正确。建议注意名词单复数和动词形式的搭配。

× No, I don't because I think it is useless. It doesn't work.

✓ No, I don't because I think it is useless. It doesn't work.

这句话语法正确，没有违反模态动词使用规则。

× Because they should be not usually remember the things, so they want to make a list to remember what they want to do.

✓ Because they usually do not need to remember things, so they want to make a list to remember what they want to do.

这里的错误是模态动词和助动词的错误使用。'should be not usually remember'结构不正确，应该用'usually do not need to remember'表达否定的习惯动作。建议学习正确的否定句型和助动词用法。

× I prefer to make a list on my because I can use those anywhere to look my list.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can use it anywhere to look at my list.

这里缺少名词，'on my'后面应加名词'phone'。另外，'use those'应改为'use it'，因为指代单数名词。'look my list'应改为'look at my list'，动词'look'后面需要介词'at'。建议注意介词搭配和代词指代的一致性。