List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, "I wanted" should be "I want" to maintain present tense, and the phrase "and will not" is incomplete and unclear. Try to use concise sentences and correct verb tenses to improve naturalness and clarity.

例: Most of the time, I make a list when I shop because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any essentials.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing, such as "the test that I can do later" which seems to be a typo for "the tasks that I can do later." Also, avoid using numbers like "1st" in spoken answers; say "first" instead. Try to use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I usually make a list at work because it helps me stay organized and prioritize tasks, so I can complete the most important ones first and be more efficient.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve coherence by using linking words such as "for example" or "because." Also, try to avoid repeating phrases like "do what they want" twice; instead, use synonyms or rephrase for variety.

例: Some people avoid making lists because they feel restricted; for example, they prefer to complete tasks spontaneously, which gives them a sense of freedom.

提案: Your answer communicates your preference but contains grammatical errors such as "I'm gonna lost it" which should be "I'm going to lose it." Also, avoid informal contractions like "gonna" in formal speaking. Try to use linking words like "because" to connect your ideas clearly.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can easily access them anytime, and I don't have to worry about losing them like I might with paper lists.

× The main reason is I wanted to stay organized and shop effectively.

✓ The main reason is I want to stay organized and shop effectively.

The sentence is describing a current reason, so the verb should be in the present tense 'want' instead of the past tense 'wanted'. Using past tense here creates a tense inconsistency.

× If I have a list, it would help me to remember and write down all the essentials that I need to buy and will not.

✓ If I have a list, it will help me to remember and write down all the essentials that I need to buy and will not.

In conditional sentences referring to real present or future situations, the modal verb 'will' should be used in the main clause instead of 'would'. 'Would' is used for hypothetical or unreal conditions.

× The reason is it helps me to stay organized and it also helps me to prioritize the task that I need to do 1st and the test that I can do later.

✓ The reason is it helps me to stay organized and it also helps me to prioritize the tasks that I need to do first and the tasks that I can do later.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple tasks. Also, '1st' should be written as 'first' for formal correctness, and 'test' is likely a typo for 'task'.

× I always prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper.

✓ I always prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper.

This sentence is correct as is; no preposition error detected.

× I don't need to worry that I'm gonna lost it and like when it's on the paper.

✓ I don't need to worry that I'm gonna lose it like when it's on paper.

The verb 'lost' is the past tense and past participle form, but here the base form 'lose' is needed after 'gonna' (going to). Also, 'like when it's on the paper' should be 'like when it's on paper' without 'the'.