List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is very brief and lacks supporting details. To improve, try to provide a complete sentence and add a reason or example to make your response more natural and effective. For example, explain why you make a list or how it helps you.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

提案: Your answer is repetitive and lacks elaboration. To improve, avoid repeating the same phrase and try to explain why you don't make a list for work or how you manage your tasks instead.

例: No, I don't usually make a list for work because I prefer to keep track of my tasks mentally or use digital reminders.

提案: This answer is too short and does not attempt to engage with the question. To improve, try to give a possible reason or opinion, even if you are unsure, to show your ability to express ideas.

例: Some people might not like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to be more spontaneous.

提案: Your answer has a grammatical error and is unclear. To improve, use a complete sentence, correct grammar, and explain why you prefer one method over the other.

例: I definitely prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I can easily edit or check them anytime.

× Absolutely phoned because they're convenient.

✓ Absolutely phone because they're convenient.

The student incorrectly used 'phoned' (past tense verb) instead of the noun 'phone'. The sentence requires a noun to indicate the preferred medium for making lists, so 'phone' is correct here.