List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use correct article and word order, for example, say 'I make a list' instead of 'I make it list'. Also, add a bit more detail to make your answer more natural and effective.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping to make sure I don't forget anything important.

提案: Use correct expressions such as 'I don't make a list' instead of 'I don't do list'. Also, explain why you haven't made a list before and why you want to try it, to add more content and coherence.

例: No, I don't usually make a list for my work, but I think I will try it because it might help me stay organized.

提案: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. For example, say 'people might forget to add items to their lists'. Also, explain more clearly why this causes people to dislike making lists.

例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they often forget to add important items, so the list becomes less useful.

提案: Use correct verb forms, for example, 'I can't lose it' instead of 'I can't lost it'. Also, add more reasons to support your preference for a more complete answer.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's easier to edit and I can't lose it like a paper list.

× Yes, I make it list when I go shopping.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping.

The phrase 'make it list' is incorrect because 'it' is not the appropriate quantifier here. The correct article to use before a singular countable noun like 'list' is 'a'. Therefore, it should be 'make a list'.

× No, I don't do list for my work, but I think I will try and make it.

✓ No, I don't make lists for my work, but I think I will try to make one.

The phrase 'do list' is incorrect; the verb 'make' is used with 'list'. Also, 'list' should be pluralized to 'lists' to indicate the general activity. 'Make it' is vague; 'make one' is clearer. Additionally, 'try and make it' is informal; 'try to make one' is more appropriate.

× In my opinion, I think people don't make lists because sometimes people forget to put to add stuff on their lists, so they might might forget to add it.

✓ In my opinion, I think people don't make lists because sometimes they forget to add stuff to their lists, so they might forget to add it.

The phrase 'put to add' is redundant and incorrect. The correct preposition after 'add' is 'to', not 'on'. Also, 'people' is repeated unnecessarily; it is better to use 'they' for clarity and conciseness. The repeated word 'might' is a typographical error.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's easier and I can't lost it.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's easier and I can't lose it.

The verb 'lost' is the past tense and past participle of 'lose'. Here, the base form 'lose' should be used after the modal verb 'can't'. Therefore, 'can't lost' is incorrect; it should be 'can't lose'.