List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复和语法错误。可以直接回答问题，然后简要说明原因，避免冗长和不连贯。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to browse and decide spontaneously what I want to buy.

提案: 回答结构较好，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯，同时避免重复词汇。

例: Yes, I often make lists for my work because as a student, I have many assignments. Making lists helps me organize my tasks for today and tomorrow, which motivates me to study more effectively.

提案: 回答时应注意语法准确，表达更清晰。可以用连接词丰富句子，使逻辑更顺畅。

例: Some people might dislike making lists because they prefer a free lifestyle and don't want to feel busy. They want to do what they enjoy and value their freedom.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达不完整的问题，应注意句子完整性和逻辑连贯。建议简洁明了地表达观点。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient. I can easily edit the list and always have it with me, unlike paper lists which I might lose.

× No I won't.

✓ No, I don't.

这里的回答是对习惯性行为的否定，应该用一般现在时的助动词'do'，而不是表示将来意愿的'would'或'will'。

× I won't prepare a list and to buy the things.

✓ I don't prepare a list to buy the things.

这里描述的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时的否定形式'don't prepare'，而不是将来时'wont prepare'。另外，'and to buy the things'结构不正确，应改为不定式短语'to buy the things'。

× Oh, of course, because I'm still a student and I have a lot of things, a lot of homework to do every day.

✓ Oh, of course, because I'm still a student and I have a lot of things and a lot of homework to do every day.

这里是并列结构，'a lot of things, a lot of homework'之间应使用连词'and'连接，保持句子结构完整。

× And that's really pushed me to study and learn more things.

✓ And that's really pushed me to study and learn more things.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× Maybe some people are are more likely to live in a free life and they don't want them to look busy.

✓ Maybe some people are more likely to live a free life and they don't want to look busy.

重复了'are'，应删除一个；'live in a free life'应改为'live a free life'；'they don't want them to look busy'中'them'用法错误，应去掉，改为'they don't want to look busy'。

× I prefer to make the list on my because it I can change it when I want and it is more convenient because if I write it on the paper I sometimes I can't find them, but if I write on my I can check it.

✓ I prefer to make the list on my phone because I can change it when I want and it is more convenient. If I write it on paper, sometimes I can't find it, but if I write it on my phone, I can check it.

'on my'后缺少名词，应补充为'on my phone'；句子结构混乱，需拆分成多个句子；'write it on the paper'中'the'不必要，改为'on paper'；'can't find them'中'them'指代不明，应改为'it'。