List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: حاول تحسين قواعد اللغة الإنجليزية وخاصة استخدام الأفعال والأزمنة بشكل صحيح. كما يجب أن تكون الإجابة أكثر وضوحًا وتنظيمًا مع استخدام كلمات ربط لتوضيح الأفكار.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the items I need to buy. For example, last week I made a list before going to the supermarket, which saved me a lot of time.

提案: ركز على استخدام الجمل الكاملة والقواعد الصحيحة، وحاول استخدام كلمات ربط لتوضيح العلاقة بين الأفكار.

例: Yes, sometimes I make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks better. This way, I don't forget important duties, especially when I have a busy schedule.

提案: حاول استخدام تراكيب لغوية صحيحة وتجنب الأخطاء النحوية. كما يجب توضيح الأفكار بشكل أفضل مع استخدام كلمات ربط مناسبة.

例: Some people dislike making lists because it takes time and requires patience. They prefer to do things quickly without planning.

提案: حاول تحسين التعبير عن الأفكار بوضوح واستخدام كلمات مناسبة. كما يجب الانتباه إلى القواعد النحوية واستخدام الجمل الكاملة.

例: I prefer to make my list on my phone because I always have it with me. Using my phone helps me avoid losing the list.

× Yes, I usually doing shopping less because it's help me to remember all the item I need to buy.

✓ Yes, I usually do less shopping because it helps me to remember all the items I need to buy.

The verb 'doing' is incorrectly used here; the correct form is 'do' for habitual actions. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'Item' should be plural 'items' because it refers to multiple things.

× For example last week I prefer less before I go to the supermarket which which which save me time.

✓ For example, last week I preferred to shop less before I went to the supermarket, which saved me time.

The verb 'prefer' should be in past tense 'preferred' to match 'last week'. 'Go' should be 'went' for past tense. 'Save' should be 'saved' to agree with past tense context. Also, 'which which which' is a repetition error.

× Yes, sometime I make less for my work that help me to organize my task better.

✓ Yes, sometimes I make lists for my work that help me to organize my tasks better.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' as an adverb. 'Make less' is incorrect; it should be 'make lists'. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'organize' multiple tasks.

× And sure don't forget important duties especially I have a busy schedule.

✓ And it surely helps me not to forget important duties, especially since I have a busy schedule.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb. Adding 'it surely helps me' clarifies the meaning. 'Sure' is incorrectly used; 'surely' is the correct adverb form.

× Some people dislike doing less because it's take time and our own patience though before doing stuff quickly without blindings.

✓ Some people dislike making lists because it takes time and requires patience before doing things quickly without mistakes.

'Doing less' is unclear; 'making lists' fits context. 'It's take' should be 'it takes' for subject-verb agreement. 'Our own patience' is awkward; 'requires patience' is better. 'Blindings' is incorrect; likely meant 'mistakes' or 'blunders'.

× I prefer to make my list on my phone because I'm always scared with me.

✓ I prefer to make my list on my phone because I'm always carrying it with me.

'Scared with me' is incorrect; likely intended to express 'carrying it with me' or 'having it with me'. The correction clarifies the intended meaning.

× Using my phone has helped me avoid losing the last.

✓ Using my phone has helped me avoid losing the list.

'The last' is incorrect; the intended word is 'the list'. This corrects the pronoun and noun usage.