List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to make your sentences more concise and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "Yes, I usually make a list before going to the shopping mall because it helps me remember what to buy, especially during busy times."

例: Yes, I usually make a list before going to the shopping mall because it helps me remember what to buy, especially during busy times.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and adding linking words. For example, say "Yes, I usually make a to-do list a day before my work because it helps me stay organized and complete my tasks properly."

例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list a day before my work because it helps me stay organized and complete my tasks properly.

提案: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words. For example, "I think it depends on the person. Younger people often don't make lists before shopping, but I find it very helpful. Older people tend to make lists more often."

例: I think it depends on the person. Younger people often don't make lists before shopping, but I find it very helpful. Older people tend to make lists more often.

提案: Your answer is good but can be more natural by simplifying and correcting grammar. For example, "I used to write lists on paper, but nowadays, with modern technology, I prefer using the notepad app on my phone because it is more convenient."

例: I used to write lists on paper, but nowadays, with modern technology, I prefer using the notepad app on my phone because it is more convenient.

× Yes, yeah, usually I make a list because to go to the shopping mall and I found this helpful and it's quite beneficial for me because I don't during the rush time, I don't I don't I don't have to remember what things I need to buy and I just.

✓ Yes, yeah, usually I make a list when I go to the shopping mall and I find it helpful and quite beneficial for me because during rush time, I don't have to remember what things I need to buy.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'because to go to the shopping mall' which is an incorrect infinitive phrase. It should be 'because when I go to the shopping mall' to indicate the time. Also, 'I found' should be 'I find' to match the present tense context. The phrase 'I don't during the rush time' is incomplete and should be corrected to 'during rush time, I don't have to remember...'. The sentence also had repeated 'I don't' which is unnecessary and confusing.

× Yeah, usually I make A to do list before a day before my work. I found this quite beneficial because it keep me organized and helpful to do my things properly.

✓ Yeah, usually I make a to-do list a day before my work. I find this quite beneficial because it keeps me organized and helps me do my tasks properly.

The phrase 'before a day before my work' is redundant; 'a day before my work' suffices. 'I found' should be 'I find' to maintain present tense consistency. 'It keep me organized' is incorrect; the verb should be 'keeps' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, 'helpful to do my things properly' is awkward; 'helps me do my tasks properly' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I think it's actually depends on person by person. Particularly I found this young generation don't make list because before go to the shopping. I think it's it's quite beneficial for me and older people do it more OK.

✓ I think it actually depends on the person. Particularly, I found that the young generation doesn't make lists because before going shopping. I think it's quite beneficial for me, and older people do it more often.

The phrase 'depends on person by person' is incorrect; it should be 'depends on the person'. 'Young generation don't make list' should be 'young generation doesn't make lists' to agree in number and subject-verb agreement. 'Because before go to the shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'because before going shopping'. The sentence was fragmented and unclear; rephrasing improves clarity.

× Well, I used to write on on paper in the past, but things have changed significantly in these days, particularly in modern technologies era. Now I try to keep note on my cell phone notepad app which is quite beneficial for me.

✓ Well, I used to write on paper in the past, but things have changed significantly these days, particularly in the modern technology era. Now I try to keep notes on my cell phone notepad app, which is quite beneficial for me.

The phrase 'in these days' should be 'these days' without 'in'. 'Modern technologies era' is incorrect; it should be 'modern technology era'. 'Keep note' should be 'keep notes' to indicate plural. Also, 'on on paper' has a repeated preposition 'on' which is an error.