List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "go to sub" (có thể bạn muốn nói "go to the supermarket"), "save my beverage" không rõ nghĩa, và "afford me to buying" sai cấu trúc. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó dùng các chi tiết cụ thể và liên kết hợp lý để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the supermarket to ensure I don't forget anything important. This helps me save time and avoid buying unnecessary items. For instance, I write down all the groceries I need and bring the list with me.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "Make a list" nên là "Making a list" hoặc "Making lists". Câu "it was very effectively" sai về ngữ pháp và cách dùng trạng từ. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích cụ thể và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I often make lists for my work because they help me organize my tasks and stay focused. For example, by listing my daily duties, I can prioritize important jobs and complete them more efficiently.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "memories that they can't remember, all the stars". Hãy giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to rely on their memory. They feel confident remembering tasks without writing them down, which helps them focus on what they consider most important.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, "More than a paper" không đúng ngữ pháp, và "design or repair" không rõ nghĩa trong ngữ cảnh này. Hãy dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, giải thích cụ thể và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và hiệu quả hơn.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and accessible than paper. With my phone, I can easily add, edit, or delete items anytime, and I always have it with me.

× Also it's helped me to manage my time and afford me to buying an accessory items.

✓ Also it has helped me to manage my time and afford me to buy accessory items.

The phrase 'afford me to buying' is incorrect because after 'afford' we use the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'it's helped' should be 'it has helped' for clarity. Additionally, 'an accessory items' is incorrect because 'items' is plural and should not have 'an' before it.

× Also it's helped me to manage my time and afford me to buying an accessory items.

✓ Also it has helped me to manage my time and afford me to buy accessory items.

The phrase 'an accessory items' is incorrect because 'an' is used with singular nouns, but 'items' is plural. The correct phrase is 'accessory items' without 'an'.

× For example, when I go to supermarket I will make write down all the things I want to purchase and bring it with me.

✓ For example, when I go to the supermarket, I write down all the things I want to purchase and bring them with me.

The phrase 'make write down' is incorrect; it should be 'write down'. Also, 'go to supermarket' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Bring it' should be 'bring them' because 'things' is plural.

× To be honest, Make a list offers a wide range of benefits for me.

✓ To be honest, making a list offers a wide range of benefits for me.

The phrase 'Make a list' should be in the gerund form 'Making a list' to function as the subject of the sentence.

× Also, it was very effectively and it helps me work easier than I do.

✓ Also, it was very effective and it helps me work more easily than I do.

The word 'effectively' is an adverb but should be the adjective 'effective' to describe 'it'. Also, 'work easier' should be 'work more easily' because 'easily' is the adverb modifying 'work'.

× Well, memories that they can't remember, all the stars, all the things they will do.

✓ Well, memories that they can't remember, all the tasks, all the things they will do.

The word 'stars' seems incorrect in context; likely the intended word is 'tasks' or 'items'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and unclear; it should be rephrased for clarity.

× I would rather make a list on my phone rather than on the paper because I think our phone is more convenient and easier to access a lot of apps.

✓ I would rather make a list on my phone rather than on paper because I think my phone is more convenient and easier to access many apps.

The phrase 'on the paper' should be 'on paper' as 'paper' is uncountable here. Also, 'our phone' should be 'my phone' to match the speaker. 'A lot of apps' is better expressed as 'many apps' in this context.

× You can bring it when you whenever and also you can design or repair.

✓ You can bring it whenever you want, and also you can design or edit it.

The phrase 'when you whenever' is incorrect; 'whenever you want' is correct. Also, 'repair' is not appropriate for lists; 'edit' or 'modify' is better.