List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but could be more concise and natural by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and 'kind of'. Also, try to provide a more specific reason or example to support your opinion.

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I trust my memory to remember what I need, which saves me time.

提案: Your answer repeats the same idea and lacks clarity. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and explain why the list is or isn't useful, using linking words for coherence.

例: Sometimes I make a list for my work, but I don't always find it useful because I tend to forget to check it.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many fillers. Try to give a direct answer with specific reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they procrastinate and prefer to rely on their memory instead.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by removing fillers and adding a bit more detail to explain why using your phone is convenient.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so it's easy to check and update my list anytime.

× I think they umm, like I said, they can. They really relied on their memories.

✓ I think they, umm, like I said, they can. They really rely on their memories.

The verb 'relied' is in the past tense, but the context suggests a general statement about people's habits, which requires the present tense 'rely' to maintain subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage.