List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然，语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because it takes too much time. Also, I often see new things that I want to buy, so I don't follow a list.

提案: 表达不够连贯，句子结构混乱，逻辑不清晰。建议先直接回答问题，然后用简单明了的句子解释原因，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: No, I don't make a list for my work because I find it troublesome. I prefer to handle tasks as they come rather than planning everything in advance.

提案: 回答内容不具体，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议明确列出原因，使用具体例子，并注意句子结构和词汇的准确性。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and difficult to include unexpected tasks. Also, planning everything can feel overwhelming.

提案: 回答较长且有重复，语法和用词有待改进。建议简洁表达，避免重复，注意连词的正确使用，使回答更自然流畅。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I usually carry it with me. It's more convenient and efficient than using paper.

× Actually not, because making a list cost me too much time and when I see something new I always want to buy it and I can't take the list into account.

✓ Actually not, because making a list costs me too much time and when I see something new I always want to buy it and I can't take the list into account.

动词cost在这里主语是单数making a list，动词需要加s，表示第三人称单数形式。

× No, because I think it is a real hassle making a list and it should put all things on the table and get the priorities first.

✓ No, because I think it is a real hassle making a list and you should put all things on the table and get the priorities first.

这里的主语应该是you而不是it，should后面需要接动作的执行者。

× No, because I think it is a real hassle making a list and it should put all things on the table and get the priorities first.

✓ No, because I think it is a real hassle making a list and you should put all things on the table and get the priorities first.

it指代不明确，应改为you，且无复数错误。

× First, they can't take expected things into account and it is a real hassle making a list.

✓ First, they can't take expected things into account and it is a real hassle making a list.

此句无明显单复数错误。

× You should make backup plans and put all things on a table so it's a trouble.

✓ You should make backup plans and put all things on the table so it's a trouble.

习惯用法中应为put on the table，the是特指桌子，缺少定冠词。

× Maybe on my phone because with the development of technique, I don't usually get paper with in my bag and but when I go outside I usually bring my phone so so I prefer to make it on my phone because it's more convenient and efficient.

✓ Maybe on my phone because with the development of technology, I don't usually get paper in my bag but when I go outside I usually bring my phone so I prefer to make it on my phone because it's more convenient and efficient.

1. technique应改为technology，更符合语境。2. 'with in'应为'in'，介词错误。3. 删除多余的'and'和重复的'so'。