List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect naturalness. Try to use simpler, correct sentences and avoid redundancy. Also, clarify your points with linking words to improve coherence.

例: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I have a good memory. However, my family prefers to make lists to avoid forgetting important items.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains repetition and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons using linking words. Avoid repeating phrases and focus on clarity.

例: No, I don't make lists for my work because I think it wastes time. Instead, I prefer to focus directly on my tasks, which helps me work more efficiently.

提案: Your answer is difficult to understand due to confusing sentence structure and word choice. Try to organize your ideas logically with clear linking words and use simpler vocabulary to express your opinion.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and think making lists wastes time. They prefer to focus directly on important tasks to finish their work faster.

提案: Your answer is mostly clear but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: Sometimes, when it's important, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always have it with me. On the other hand, paper lists can be easily lost, so using my phone is less risky.

× No, I do not make a list when I go to a shop because my memory was are very sharp, so I do not need to make any type of list.

✓ No, I do not make a list when I go to a shop because my memory is very sharp, so I do not need to make any type of list.

The phrase 'was are' is incorrect because it mixes past and present forms. Since the sentence is about a current state, 'is' should be used to indicate present tense.

× But my family always prefer to make a list because they do not want to forget any type of things, which is quite significant in the for them.

✓ But my family always prefers to make a list because they do not want to forget any type of things, which is quite significant for them.

The subject 'my family' is singular, so the verb should be 'prefers' to agree in number. Also, 'in the for them' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'for them'.

× which is quite significant in the for them.

✓ which is quite significant for them.

The phrase 'in the for them' is incorrect. The correct preposition to express importance to someone is 'for'.

× No, I didn't make any type of list for my work because I feel that it is a wastage of time as compared to such a time I can give an attentions to on other topics which help me to reduce my level of work also.

✓ No, I don't make any type of list for my work because I feel that it is a waste of time; instead, I can give attention to other topics which help me reduce my workload.

The sentence mixes past tense 'didn't make' with present tense 'feel'. Since the question is general, present tense 'don't make' fits better. Also, 'wastage' is less common than 'waste', and 'attentions' should be singular 'attention'. The phrase 'reduce my level of work' is better expressed as 'reduce my workload'.

× I can give an attentions to on other topics which help me to reduce my level of work also.

✓ I can give attention to other topics which help me reduce my workload.

The phrase 'give an attentions to on' is incorrect. The correct form is 'give attention to' without 'an' or 'on'.

× No, I didn't make any type of list for my work because I feel that it is a wastage of time as compared to such a time I can give an attentions to on other topics which help me to reduce my level of work also.

✓ No, I don't make any type of list for my work because I feel that it is a waste of time; instead, I can give attention to other topics which help me reduce my workload.

The phrase 'any type of list' is awkward; 'any list' or 'a list' is more natural. Also, 'wastage' is better replaced with 'waste' in this context.

× Prefer today given to prefer to they give instead of it.

✓ They prefer to give attention instead of making a list.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect pronoun and word order usage. The correction clarifies the intended meaning with proper pronouns and structure.

× Prefer today given to prefer to they give instead of it.

✓ They prefer to give attention instead of making a list.

The original phrase is a fragment and uses conjunctions incorrectly. The correction provides a complete sentence with proper conjunction usage.

× They prefer to give an attention on an important task, so that bit their work is quite become reduced.

✓ They prefer to give attention to important tasks, so their workload is reduced.

The phrase 'give an attention on' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'give attention to'. Also, 'quite become reduced' is awkward; 'is reduced' is clearer.

× I prefer to make a list on my phones because my phones is remain with me at all the times and some if I talk about such a paper, sometime I quite forget anywhere.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone remains with me at all times, and if I talk about paper, sometimes I quite forget it anywhere.

The word 'phones' is plural but should be singular 'phone' to match the context. Also, 'is remain' is incorrect; it should be 'remains'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'.

× I prefer to make a list on my phones because my phones is remain with me at all the times and some if I talk about such a paper, sometime I quite forget anywhere.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone remains with me at all times, and if I talk about paper, sometimes I quite forget it anywhere.

The phrase 'quite forget anywhere' is awkward; 'forget it anywhere' is clearer. Also, 'at all the times' should be 'at all times'.