List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity towards the end. Try to avoid repeating phrases and ensure your sentences are complete and clear. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping. I usually prepare it on my smartphone in advance, which helps me remember everything I need to buy and saves time.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and could be more coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas and check verb tenses for accuracy.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it helps me a lot. For example, I write down all the tasks I need to complete the next day, which keeps me organised and ensures I don't forget anything.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more formal vocabulary and linking words to make your explanation smoother.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they believe lists are useless and limit spontaneity. For instance, my brother thinks he might forget the list itself, so he considers making lists a waste of time.

提案: Your answer contains many hesitations and incomplete sentences. Try to speak more fluently and clearly, avoiding filler words. Also, structure your answer with clear reasons and linking words.

例: I prefer to make lists on my smartphone because I always have it with me. In contrast, paper lists can be easily forgotten or lost, which makes them less reliable for me.

× I almost do everything on lists.

✓ I almost do everything using lists.

The phrase 'do everything on lists' is awkward and unidiomatic. The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used here (Grammar problem type ID: 11). Using 'using lists' is more natural and grammatically correct in English.

× When I when I go shopping, I make a list in my smartphone beforehand in advance and then I'll take off when I.

✓ When I go shopping, I make a list on my smartphone beforehand, and then I go out.

The sentence contains repetition ('When I when I'), incomplete clause ('then I'll take off when I'), and awkward phrasing. 'Take off' is informal and unclear here. The sentence structure needs correction for clarity and completeness (Grammar problem type ID: 26). Also, 'in my smartphone' should be 'on my smartphone' (Grammar problem type ID: 11).

× I wrote down all the tasks I have to finish next day just before today and it keep me organized and remember things to do.

✓ I wrote down all the tasks I have to finish the next day just before today, and it keeps me organised and helps me remember things to do.

The verb 'keep' should be 'keeps' to agree with the singular subject 'it' (Grammar problem type ID: 27). Also, 'next day' should be 'the next day' (Grammar problem type ID: 11). The phrase 'remember things to do' is better expressed as 'helps me remember things to do' for clarity and grammatical correctness (Grammar problem type ID: 26).

× He says he's gonna forget the list itself even if he does the list in advance, and so it's a waste of time.

✓ He says he's going to forget the list itself even if he makes the list in advance, so it's a waste of time.

'Gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'going to' in formal speech (Grammar problem type ID: 4). Also, 'does the list' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'makes the list' (Grammar problem type ID: 26). The conjunction 'and so' is better simplified to 'so' for clarity (Grammar problem type ID: 16).

× I like to, umm, make a list on my smartphone. It's going to be a waste of time if I, uh, forget about the paper list, uh, itself.

✓ I like to make a list on my smartphone. It would be a waste of time if I forgot the paper list itself.

The phrase 'forget about the paper list' is better expressed as 'forgot the paper list' to fit the conditional structure (Grammar problem type ID: 6). Also, 'It's going to be' is better as 'It would be' in this hypothetical context (Grammar problem type ID: 7). The filler words 'umm' and 'uh' should be omitted for clarity.

× But I don't think I'm going to forget about, I forget to take my smartphone.

✓ But I don't think I'm going to forget to take my smartphone.

The phrase 'forget about, I forget to take' is ungrammatical and redundant. The correct form is 'forget to take' (Grammar problem type ID: 6). The sentence should be concise and clear without unnecessary repetition.