List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Which type of error?
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes, I always make go make a list for my work, because some work I forget some work I do. So it's very challenging, challenging situation. And after that when I unable to do my work, my mother scold me you should to do this work. Why should you don't do?
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
Because the people are smart and intelligent. They remember all things that after that I will do this work I should do, I, I want to do, I, I, I could do so they remember.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
When I don't have phone I make list in paper all them. But right now I have phone so I make a list in my phone because it is easy and it it always in my hand and I can see whenever I want to see. So it is very easy for making list in my phone.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 30.0提案: Your answer does not address the question directly. Try to respond clearly and relevantly to the question asked. Also, avoid confusion by understanding the question before answering.
例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop to ensure I don't forget anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 45.0提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific reasons and examples. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.
例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because sometimes I forget tasks. This helps me stay organized and avoid missing important duties.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 40.0提案: Your answer is confusing and repetitive. Try to give a clear reason with supporting details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.
例: Some people don't like making lists because they believe they have a good memory and can remember their tasks without writing them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 65.0提案: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use concise sentences and correct grammar to improve clarity.
例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and always with me, but if I don't have my phone, I write lists on paper.
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