List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Of course, yes, I do make a list when I shop. It keeps me in a budget and reminds me all of the things that I have to purchase. So yes.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Absolutely, I make a list from my work as well as I'm a student and to keep my studies on track, I make a list for all my upcoming assignments, tests and quizzes to keep updated so that I finish all my completed tasks.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
Some people don't like making list because it would be like overwhelming for them and like it may take a little time to make a list that you have to do things, these kind of things. So some people don't like it.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I prefer to make a list on my my phone instead of writing it down on a paper 'cause nowadays we have our app, we have our phone everywhere with us, and I put a reminder on my phone to remind me that I have to complete this task.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 75.0提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "Of course, yes" and "So yes." Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.
例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stick to my budget and remember everything I need to buy.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 70.0提案: Your answer is informative but a bit long and slightly unclear in parts. Try to use shorter sentences and clearer linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas like "to keep my studies on track" and "to keep updated."
例: Yes, I make lists for my work and studies. For example, I list all my upcoming assignments, tests, and quizzes to stay organized and ensure I complete everything on time.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 60.0提案: Your answer has some grammar and clarity issues. Try to avoid filler words like "like" and be more precise. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and provide specific examples.
例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it overwhelming and time-consuming to write down all their tasks.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 75.0提案: Your answer is good but can be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating words like "my my" and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to use more formal expressions instead of "'cause."
例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, and I can set reminders to help me complete my tasks on time.
文法
× Some people don't like making list because it would be like overwhelming for them and like it may take a little time to make a list that you have to do things, these kind of things.
✓ Some people don't like making lists because it would be overwhelming for them and it may take a little time to make a list of things they have to do, these kinds of things.
The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists. Also, 'these kind of things' should be 'these kinds of things' to agree in number with 'these'. The phrase 'like overwhelming' is corrected to 'overwhelming' for clarity and correctness.
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