List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中出现了词汇错误（"cholesterol"应为"a list"），影响了表达的清晰度。建议注意词汇的准确使用，同时避免句子冗长，保持回答简洁自然。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because it restricts my choices. Without a list, I can freely explore and buy whatever catches my interest, which makes shopping more enjoyable. For example, I sometimes find unexpected good deals or new products.

提案: 回答中表达重复且句子结构不够清晰，建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: No, I don't make a list for my work because I feel it restricts me. I prefer to be flexible so I can try different tasks and be more productive.

提案: 回答不够具体，且语法错误较多。建议直接回答问题，使用具体原因并注意语法准确。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel restricted and prefer to have the freedom to do other things spontaneously.

提案: 回答中有重复和不连贯的表达，建议简化句子，使用连接词使表达更流畅，并明确比较两者的优缺点。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I use it every day and get reminders. This helps me complete tasks faster. Although paper lists are good, phone lists are more convenient for me.

× No, I usually don't make cholesterol.

✓ No, I usually don't make a list.

这里学生错误地使用了“cholesterol”（胆固醇），应为“list”（清单）。这是词汇使用错误，属于形容词或副词使用不当的范畴。建议注意词汇的正确选择。

× For example, sometimes I find unexpected good deals or new products that I will.

✓ For example, sometimes I find unexpected good deals or new products that I will buy.

句子缺少谓语动词，导致结构不完整。应补充动词“buy”使句子完整。建议写句子时确保主语和谓语完整。

× I don't make a list when I go work because I don't like to make a list just because it restricts and I don't like to be ruled or limited by the list so I can do more and try more jobs and works.

✓ I don't make a list when I go to work because I don't like to make a list just because it restricts me and I don't like to be ruled or limited by the list, so I can do more and try more jobs and work.

“go work”应为“go to work”，缺少介词“to”。此外，“restricts”后应加宾语“me”。“jobs and works”中“works”用法不当，应为“work”。建议注意介词的正确使用和名词的单复数形式。

× I think this would be a very good question for some people.

✓ I think this is a very good question for some people.

时态使用不当，题目询问的是一般事实，应使用现在时“is”而非“would be”。建议根据语境选择正确时态。

× We don't like to make a list when we are working because we don't like to be very restrict and it will be limited when we like to do other things.

✓ We don't like to make a list when we are working because we don't like to be very restricted and it will be limiting when we want to do other things.

“restrict”应为形容词“restricted”，表示被限制的状态；“limited”应改为现在分词“limiting”，表示限制的性质；“like to do”应为“want to do”。建议注意形容词和动词形式的正确使用。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because every day I touch my phone and the notifications that will that will remind me.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because every day I use my phone and the notifications will remind me.

“touch my phone”表达不自然，应改为“use my phone”；“that will that will”重复，应删去一个“that will”。建议注意表达的自然性和避免重复。

× So I will try my best and do something quicker than before.

✓ So I will try my best and do things more quickly than before.

“do something quicker”结构不当，应改为“do things more quickly”，使用副词修饰动词。建议注意副词和名词的正确搭配。

× I wrote down the list on the paper and besides, it's a very good one.

✓ I wrote down the list on paper and besides, it's a very good one.

“on the paper”中“the”多余，通常表达为“on paper”。建议注意冠词的正确使用。