List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误，如“don't like make”应为“don't like to make”。此外，表达可以更自然，避免重复“things”，并且可以增加具体细节来丰富内容。

例: No, I don't like to make a list when I shop because I prefer a casual approach. Besides buying what I need, I enjoy discovering new and interesting products spontaneously.

提案: 回答中时态使用不准确，如“make a list is useful”应为“making a list is useful”，并且“I will be an idiot”表达不够正式。建议使用更合适的表达方式，并注意时态一致。

例: Yes, making a list is very useful for me. If I prepare a plan a day in advance, I feel energetic and can complete all my tasks. However, if I don't, I often feel unproductive throughout the day.

提案: 回答中语序有误，如“what should they do”应为“what they should do”，并且“another people”应为“other people”。建议注意语法和用词准确性，同时可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they clearly know what they should do and can concentrate to complete their tasks efficiently. However, other people prefer a more casual lifestyle without strict plans.

提案: 回答整体较好，但时态不一致，如“If I prepared”应为“If I prepare”。建议注意时态一致性，并可以增加更多细节说明为什么纸质列表更有效。

例: I prefer to make lists on paper because I have a dedicated notebook for my plans. Writing on paper helps me stay more focused than using my phone. Also, if I prepare my plan the night before, I usually feel more energetic and organized the next day.

× No, I don't like make a list when I shop.

✓ No, I don't like making a list when I shop.

动词like后面接动名词形式making，而不是动词原形make。

× Besides what I need, I enjoy exploring new things and fresh things.

✓ Besides what I need, I enjoy exploring new and fresh things.

形容词new和fresh修饰复数名词things时，形容词不需要重复。

× Yes, make a list is useful for me.

✓ Yes, making a list is useful for me.

此处make a list应改为动名词短语making a list，作为主语使用。

× If I made a plan one day in advance, I will work full of energy and finish all tasks.

✓ If I make a plan one day in advance, I will work full of energy and finish all tasks.

条件句第一类条件句中，if从句用一般现在时，主句用将来时。

× But if I didn't do that, I can't do anything all day and I will be an idiot.

✓ But if I don't do that, I can't do anything all day and I will be an idiot.

同上，条件句中if从句应使用一般现在时。

× Some people don't like making these because they clearly know what should they do, they can concentrate and complete all their tasks efficiently, and they can organize their life well.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they clearly know what they should do, they can concentrate and complete all their tasks efficiently, and they can organize their lives well.

making后应接复数名词lists；what从句中应为陈述语序they should do；life应为复数形式lives，指不同人的生活。

× Besides what I need, I enjoy exploring new things and fresh things.

✓ Besides what I need, I enjoy exploring new and fresh things.

形容词修饰名词时，多个形容词应连用而非重复名词。

× However, another people prefer to have a more casual lifestyle.

✓ However, other people prefer to have a more casual lifestyle.

another用于单数名词，people为复数，应使用other people。