List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和语法错误，保持回答简洁且逻辑清晰。

例: If I want to buy something special, I usually make a list to remember everything. But if I go shopping just for fun, I don't make a list. Sometimes I just go to the supermarket or mall to relax and have a coffee or juice.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议注意时态和单复数的正确使用，避免重复，增加连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I always make a list before I start my work because I am a medical student. My work is very complicated, so making a list helps me stay organized and not forget important tasks.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，重复词语较多。建议用更准确的词汇表达观点，避免重复，句子要完整且逻辑清楚。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they want their life to be full of surprises. They prefer to do things randomly rather than following a fixed plan, which makes life more interesting for them.

提案: 回答中有重复词语和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用连接词使表达更自然。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient. For example, I can use WeChat to write down things and set reminders for important tasks. This helps me stay organized and not forget anything.

× Really I want to buy something special, I will make list, but you if I want to just for fun go shopping, I don't make a list.

✓ Really, if I want to buy something special, I will make a list, but if I just want to go shopping for fun, I don't make a list.

这里缺少冠词“a”，因为“list”是可数名词，单数时需要冠词。应使用“a list”而不是“list”。

× I may maybe I go to the supermarket or the any other mail straight to have fun like drinking a coffee, drinking juice or any other things.

✓ Maybe I go to the supermarket or any other mall straight to have fun, like drinking coffee, drinking juice, or other things.

“mail straight”应为“mall straight”，且“the any other”用法错误，应去掉“the”。此外，“a coffee”通常说“coffee”即可，表示不可数名词。

× My work is very complicate, complicate.

✓ My work is very complicated.

“complicate”是动词，形容词应为“complicated”。

× So I I must make a list before I begin to my work.

✓ So I must make a list before I begin my work.

“begin”后面不需要介词“to”，直接加宾语即可。

× I think some people, they want their life full of the surprise, so they don't like to make a list.

✓ I think some people want their life full of surprises, so they don't like to make a list.

“life”是单数，通常用“full of surprises”复数形式，且“they”与前面主语重复，应省略。

× They want the random things to make their makes their life not not that, not that, not that. Such boring, yes.

✓ They want random things to make their life not so boring.

“the random things”应为“random things”，且句子结构混乱，需简化表达。

× I prefer to make this on my phone because the phone is very convenient to make list.

✓ I prefer to make this on my phone because the phone is very convenient to make a list.

“list”是可数名词，单数时需要冠词“a”。

× You can just list some some things on your WeChat, the and and and it can and you can set a clock to remind you for the important things.

✓ You can just list some things on your WeChat, and you can set a clock to remind you of important things.

“remind you for”应为“remind you of”，介词使用错误。