List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并补充具体细节。

例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. For example, when I go to the supermarket, I just pick what I need at the moment.

提案: 回答较为简洁，但表达不够流畅，且用词不准确。建议使用更自然的表达，并用连接词丰富内容。

例: Yes, I often make a list when I have many tasks. It helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

提案: 回答内容较为简单，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词，丰富理由，并用更准确的词汇表达观点。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it tedious and time-consuming. Moreover, they believe that unexpected events can disrupt their plans, making lists less useful.

提案: 回答较为完整，但有语法错误和重复。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because paper can be easily lost. Also, I can save my lists on iCloud, which makes them accessible anytime and anywhere.

× Not really, I'm because I'm not a housewife, I just a kid.

✓ Not really, because I'm not a housewife, I'm just a kid.

原句中“I'm because”结构不正确，导致句子结构混乱。应将“because”放在句首引导原因状语从句，主句为“I'm just a kid”，使句子结构完整通顺。

× I will go to go to the mall or go to supermarket to buy anything that I want to buy.

✓ I will go to the mall or go to the supermarket to buy anything that I want to buy.

“supermarket”前缺少冠词“the”，因为这里指特定的超市。名词前缺少冠词属于单复数问题中的冠词使用错误。

× Sometimes I think if I have a lot of work, I'll make a list to make sure that, umm, my business will be organized or construct.

✓ Sometimes I think if I have a lot of work, I'll make a list to make sure that, umm, my business will be organized or constructed.

“construct”应使用过去分词“constructed”与“organized”保持一致，作为形容词用来修饰“business”。

× Well, the first reason may be they're lazy, they don't want to do it.

✓ Well, the first reason may be that they're lazy and they don't want to do it.

原句中缺少连接词“that”引导宾语从句，且两个并列分句之间应使用连词“and”连接，保证句子结构完整。

× I think make a list on my phone is better because paper is easy to get lost, but I use my phone and I could uh, upload the list in the iCloud, the function that Apple I that Apple phone have.

✓ I think making a list on my phone is better because paper is easy to get lost, but I use my phone and I can, uh, upload the list to iCloud, a function that Apple phones have.

“make a list”应改为动名词“making a list”作主语；“upload the list in the iCloud”中介词应为“to”表示上传到某处；“the function that Apple I that Apple phone have”语序混乱，应改为“a function that Apple phones have”。