List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use correct verb forms and articles to make your answer more natural. For example, say "before I go to the store" and "the important items". Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important items.

提案: Be careful with repeated words like "by by" and use plural forms correctly, such as "subjects". Also, use linking words like "so" or "therefore" to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I study because it helps me organize my subjects and manage time for each topic. For example, by listing my tasks, I can ensure I spend enough time on each subject.

提案: Focus on grammar and clarity. Use correct expressions like "takes too much time" and complete your sentences fully. Avoid incomplete phrases like "and takes and."

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time. However, I usually advise them to make lists because it helps organize their tasks better and saves time in the long run.

提案: Use correct verb tenses such as "made" instead of "make" for past actions. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition like "with my in my phone."

例: In the past, I made my lists on paper, but now I use my phone because it's easier and more convenient.

× I usually make a shopping list before I going to the store because it helps me to organize and avoid forgetting the important item.

✓ I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me to organize and avoid forgetting the important item.

The verb 'going' is incorrectly used after 'I' without an auxiliary verb. After 'before I', the base form of the verb 'go' should be used, not the '-ing' form. The correct phrase is 'before I go to the store'. This is because 'before' is followed by a clause with a subject and a verb in the base form when expressing future time.

× I usually make a shopping list before I going to the store because it helps me to organize and avoid forgetting the important item.

✓ I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me to organize and avoid forgetting the important items.

The phrase 'the important item' should be plural 'the important items' because it refers to multiple things that might be forgotten during shopping. Using the singular 'item' is incorrect when talking about more than one thing.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I want to study because it helps me to organize my subject and manage the time for each topic.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I want to study because it helps me to organize my subjects and manage the time for each topic.

The word 'subject' should be plural 'subjects' because the student is likely referring to multiple subjects to study, not just one. Using the singular form is incorrect in this context.

× For example, by by listing I can ensure I take enough time for each subject.

✓ For example, by listing, I can ensure I take enough time for each subject.

The phrase 'by by listing' contains a repeated word 'by' which is incorrect. Also, a comma after 'listing' improves clarity. The correct phrase is 'by listing'.

× I think some people don't like making list because they feel it takes more much time.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists. Also, 'more much' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'too much' to express excessiveness.

× I think some people don't like making list because they feel it takes more much time.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time.

The phrase 'more much' is incorrect. The correct quantifier to express excessiveness is 'too much'. Also, 'list' should be plural 'lists' as explained before.

× However, usually I advise them to make a list because it helps them organize their task better and takes and.

✓ However, usually I advise them to make a list because it helps them organize their tasks better and saves time.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and takes and' which is incomplete and unclear. It should be completed to convey the intended meaning. 'Organize their task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context. Also, 'takes and' is incorrect and replaced with 'saves time' to complete the thought.

× In the past I make my list in the paper, but now I make it with my in my phone because it's easier and it's better.

✓ In the past I made my list on paper, but now I make it on my phone because it's easier and better.

The verb 'make' should be in the past tense 'made' to match 'In the past'. Also, the preposition 'in the paper' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on paper'. The phrase 'with my in my phone' is incorrect and should be 'on my phone'. The phrase 'it's easier and it's better' can be simplified to 'it's easier and better' for naturalness.