List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Tapai ko uttar ma thulo sentence haru cha ra grammar thik chhaina. Tapai le present tense ra past tense mix garnu bhayeko cha. English ma sentence haru chhoto ra spashta hunu parcha. Tapai le linking words jastai 'because' ramro sanga prayog garnu bhayeko cha, tara sentence structure ma sudhar garnu parcha.

例: Yes, I sometimes make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember all the things I need for myself and my house.

提案: Tapai ko uttar ma repetition cha ra sentence structure confused cha. English ma clarity ra conciseness dherai important cha. Linking words ko prayog ramro cha tara sentence lai sajilo ra prabhavshali banau.

例: Yes, I sometimes make a list for my work because it helps me remember important tasks and ensures I don't forget anything.

提案: Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma thulo samasya cha. 'Used to' ko prayog thik garna parcha ra sentence lai complete ra clear banau. English ma sentence haru chhoto ra logical hunu parcha.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they are not used to it at first. I wasn't used to it either, but gradually I got used to it and now it helps me work more efficiently.

提案: Tapai ko uttar ma thulo sentence haru cha ra thoda grammar mistakes cha. 'Disappear' ko sahi prayog garna parcha. Sentence haru lai chhoto ra clear banau ra linking words ko prayog ramro cha.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I move around a lot. Paper lists can get lost, but with my phone, I can access my list anywhere easily.

× Yes, sometimes when I have a long list, I make a list when I went to the shop because it helps me to remember all the things that is needed for me and for my house.

✓ Yes, sometimes when I have a long list, I make a list when I go to the shop because it helps me to remember all the things that are needed for me and for my house.

The phrase 'when I went to the shop' incorrectly uses past tense 'went' while the context requires present tense 'go' to match 'sometimes' and habitual action. Also, 'things that is needed' has a singular verb 'is' with plural subject 'things', so it should be 'are needed'. Suggestions: Use present tense 'go' for habitual actions and ensure subject-verb agreement with plural subjects.

× Yes, sometimes when I have a long list, I make a list when I went to the shop because it helps me to remember all the things that is needed for me and for my house.

✓ Yes, sometimes when I have a long list, I make a list when I go to the shop because it helps me to remember all the things that are needed for me and for my house.

The subject 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Suggestion: Match plural subjects with plural verbs for correct subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, sometimes I make a list for my work because it it is quite helpful to me because it helps me to remember all these works which are important though so and it is also helpful because you don't need you don't forget anything to do.

✓ Yes, sometimes I make a list for my work because it is quite helpful to me as it helps me to remember all the tasks which are important, and it is also helpful because you don't forget anything to do.

The sentence has redundant words and awkward phrasing. 'Works' is incorrect here; 'tasks' or 'things' is better. Also, 'you don't need you don't forget' is incorrect and should be 'you don't forget'. Suggestion: Use appropriate nouns like 'tasks' instead of 'works' and avoid redundant phrases for clarity.

× Some people don't like making list because they are not used to of that when at the first time.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they are not used to that at first.

The phrase 'used to of that' is incorrect; the correct form is 'used to that'. Also, 'making list' should be plural 'making lists'. 'When at the first time' is awkward; 'at first' is better. Suggestion: Use 'used to' without 'of' and correct plural forms and idiomatic expressions.

× I also I'm not also used to it, but slowly, slowly I'm being used to of that and it helps me so efficiently and I'm.

✓ I also wasn't used to it, but slowly, slowly I'm getting used to it and it helps me very efficiently.

The sentence has pronoun and tense issues. 'I'm not also used to it' is awkward; past tense 'wasn't used to it' fits better. 'I'm being used to of that' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'I'm getting used to it'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'and I'm.' Suggestion: Use correct verb phrases for 'used to' and complete sentences properly.

× Some people don't like making list because they are not used to of that when at the first time.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they are not used to that at first.

'Making list' should be plural 'making lists' because it refers to the general activity. Suggestion: Use plural form when referring to general activities or multiple items.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because nowadays I'm moving here and there, so the paper may be disappear anywhere, it may be lost.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because nowadays I'm moving here and there, so the paper may disappear anywhere; it may be lost.

The phrase 'may be disappear' is incorrect; 'may disappear' is correct. Also, 'may be lost' is correct. The sentence needs a semicolon or period to separate ideas. Suggestion: Use modal verb + base verb without 'be' for possibility and proper punctuation.

× So when I save my list into my phone, it helps me to open anywhere and see my list.

✓ So when I save my list on my phone, it helps me to open it anywhere and see my list.

The correct preposition with 'save' and 'phone' is 'on', not 'into'. Also, 'open anywhere' is incomplete; 'open it anywhere' is clearer. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions and include necessary pronouns for clarity.