List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains errors that affect naturalness and clarity, such as 'catch my intestine' which seems incorrect. Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid mistakes that confuse the meaning. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I like to decide what to buy spontaneously. This allows me to be flexible and sometimes discover new products that interest me.

提案: Your answer repeats the previous response and does not address the question about making lists for work. Make sure to answer the question directly and avoid repetition. Also, provide clear supporting details with linking words to improve coherence.

例: For my work, I usually make a list to organise my tasks because it helps me stay focused and complete everything on time. However, for small tasks, I prefer to be flexible and decide as I go.

提案: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases like 'fear that least limits' and 'making less boring or time consuming, so they are'. Try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be flexible and spontaneous. For instance, they may feel that lists limit their creativity or freedom. Additionally, some find making lists boring or time-consuming.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete and incorrect phrases such as 'lighting word is' and 'on the farm is it's easier to form'. Please try to express your ideas clearly and use complete sentences. Also, directly compare the two options with reasons.

例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember things better. However, using my phone is more convenient when I'm out shopping.

× This way I can be a flexible and sometimes discover new things that catch my intestine.

✓ This way I can be flexible and sometimes discover new things that catch my interest.

The adjective 'flexible' should not have the article 'a' before it because it is an uncountable adjective describing a state or quality. Also, 'intestine' is a noun referring to a part of the body and is incorrect here; the correct word is 'interest', which means attention or curiosity.

× I think some people don't like make a list because they prefer to be flexible and spontaneous.

✓ I think some people don't like to make a list because they prefer to be flexible and spontaneous.

After 'don't like', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to make' or the gerund form 'making'. Here, 'to make' fits better to express preference.

× For example, they might fear that least limits their creativity or freedom.

✓ For example, they might fear that lists limit their creativity or freedom.

The word 'least' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'lists', referring to the plural noun. Also, 'limits' should be 'limit' to agree with the plural subject 'lists'.

× Also some people find making less boring or time consuming, so they are.

✓ Also some people find making lists boring or time-consuming, so they avoid it.

The phrase 'making less boring or time consuming' is incorrect. It should be 'making lists boring or time-consuming'. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'so they avoid it' clarifies the meaning.

× I prefer writing down on paper because lighting word is. Suitable for me, on the other hand on the farm is it's easier to form.

✓ I prefer writing down on paper because it is suitable for me; on the other hand, on the phone it is easier to use.

The original sentence contains nonsensical phrases like 'lighting word is' and 'on the farm is it's easier to form'. These appear to be errors or mishearings. The corrected sentence uses appropriate expressions to convey the intended meaning clearly.