List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng chưa chính xác (ví dụ: 'saw' thay vì 'shop', 'go to shopping' thay vì 'go shopping'). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và nói lan man.

例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list. I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need at the moment.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có liên kết logic giữa các câu.

例: I don't usually make a written list for my work. Instead, I plan all the steps in my mind and follow them, which works well for me.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng, làm giảm tính hiệu quả và tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, giải thích rõ lý do và dùng từ vựng phù hợp.

例: Some people don't like making lists because it takes too much time. They find it faster and more convenient to remember tasks in their mind.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ, làm giảm sự tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp lại và dùng từ phù hợp.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's always with me, so I can check it anytime easily.

× I don't often make a list when I saw because, uh, I'm not that person.

✓ I don't often make a list when I shop because, uh, I'm not that person.

The verb 'saw' is past tense and does not fit the present tense context of the sentence. The correct verb should be 'shop' to match the present tense 'don't often make'.

× I often go to shopping randomly, just what I need, just popping my mind and I buy it.

✓ I often go shopping randomly, just what I need, just popping into my mind and I buy it.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' without 'to'. Also, 'popping my mind' should be 'popping into my mind' to correctly express the idea of something coming to mind.

× I'm not right now, at least when it works, but I have it in my mind when I have an objective.

✓ I'm not doing it right now, at least when it works, but I have it in my mind when I have an objective.

The phrase 'I'm not right now' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'doing it' clarifies the meaning. The rest of the sentence is acceptable.

× I just figured out this all step in my mind and I just follow it.

✓ I just figure out all these steps in my mind and I just follow them.

The phrase 'figured out' is past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'figure out' is appropriate. Also, 'this all step' should be 'all these steps' to correct singular/plural and article usage.

× Because it take a lot of time and really late for me or for someone else so that they just need to figure out all step in the mind and more conveniently faster so that all.

✓ Because it takes a lot of time and is really late for me or for someone else, so they just need to figure out all the steps in their mind more conveniently and faster, so that's all.

The verb 'take' should be 'takes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'All step' should be 'all the steps' to correct plural and article usage. Also, sentence structure and pronouns were adjusted for clarity.

× I don't want to make a list, but if I have to choose, I choose my class on my phone because the phone is always on in my pocket.

✓ I don't want to make a list, but if I have to choose, I choose my list on my phone because the phone is always on in my pocket.

The word 'class' seems to be a typo or incorrect word; it should be 'list' to fit the context. The preposition 'on' is correct here.

× I and I just check it and check it out on my phone. Yeah, it's more conveniently.

✓ I just check it and check it out on my phone. Yeah, it's more convenient.

The phrase 'I and I' is redundant; one 'I' is sufficient. 'More conveniently' is an adverb but should be the adjective 'more convenient' to describe 'it'.