List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Absolutely, I usually make a list before I go to shop and I'm a person who's very keen on making a list because I like things that is well prepared and prepare things before can make me happy.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes, I usually make A to do list before starting my work as a student. It helps me organize my study time more efficiently so I waste less time and can balance both studying and relaxing more reasonably. For example, I often play in my tasks night before which allows me to stay focused.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time. For example, they prefer to act directly about planning in advance as to believe it is more efficient. Additionally, they may fail to make A to do list is unnecessary and lows them down.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
Well, I prefer to make a list on paper. As a boarding school student, we are not allowed to bring our phones to school, so it is more convenient and more direct for me to list my schedule on paper.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 70.0提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构较为混乱。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和主谓一致，使表达更流畅自然。
例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I like to be well prepared. It helps me remember everything I need and makes shopping easier.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“play in my tasks night before”不明确。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，确保表达清楚且连贯。
例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list before studying. It helps me manage my time better and balance study and rest. For example, I plan my tasks the night before to stay focused the next day.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不准确，如“fail to make A to do list is unnecessary and lows them down”。建议简化句子，使用正确的语法表达观点。
例: Some people dislike making lists because they think it takes too much time. They prefer to act immediately without planning, believing it is more efficient.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答较为清晰，但可以增加一些连接词使表达更连贯，同时丰富细节。
例: I prefer making lists on paper because, as a boarding school student, I can't bring my phone to school. Therefore, writing on paper is more convenient and straightforward for me.
文法
× I like things that is well prepared and prepare things before can make me happy.
✓ I like things that are well prepared and preparing things beforehand can make me happy.
这里的主语是复数形式的'things'，谓语动词应该用复数形式'are'，而不是单数形式'is'。此外，'prepare things before'结构不完整，改为动名词形式'preparing things beforehand'更符合表达习惯。
× For example, I often play in my tasks night before which allows me to stay focused.
✓ For example, I often plan my tasks the night before, which allows me to stay focused.
原句中的'play in my tasks'用词错误，应为'plan my tasks'。此外，'night before'前应加定冠词'the'，使表达更准确。
× they prefer to act directly about planning in advance as to believe it is more efficient.
✓ they prefer to act directly rather than planning in advance as they believe it is more efficient.
'act directly about planning'表达不正确，应改为'prefer to act directly rather than planning'，表示'更喜欢直接行动而不是提前计划'。同时，'as to believe'应改为'as they believe'，使句子通顺。
× they may fail to make A to do list is unnecessary and lows them down.
✓ they may think making a to-do list is unnecessary and slows them down.
'fail to make A to do list is unnecessary'结构混乱，应改为'think making a to-do list is unnecessary'。'lows'拼写错误，应为'slows'，表示'减慢'。
× so it is more convenient and more direct for me to list my schedule on paper.
✓ so it is more convenient and more direct for me to write my schedule on paper.
'list my schedule'用词不当，通常用'write my schedule'表示'写下我的日程'，更符合习惯用法。
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