List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用正确的时态和更自然的表达方式，同时避免重复和语无伦次。可以简洁明了地表达观点，并适当补充理由。

例: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I find shopping enjoyable and spontaneous. Making a list might make it feel like a chore, which I want to avoid.

提案: 回答中语法和句子结构不够准确，建议使用正确的时态和连词，使句子更流畅。同时，内容可以更具体，说明列清单如何帮助提高效率。

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize important tasks and plan the next steps. This way, I can work more efficiently and complete my tasks faster.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的动词形式和时态，表达观点时更具体，并用连接词使句子连贯。

例: Well, I think some people dislike making lists because they value freedom in their lifestyle and prefer not to plan everything in advance.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，建议注意动词形式和形容词的正确使用。内容表达清晰，但可以更自然流畅。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and easy to carry with me. Also, it's easier to edit or change items whenever I need to.

× No, I don't make a list when I was sharp because I think shop is a very happy thing.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I shop because I think shopping is a very happy thing.

这里的时间是现在时，不能用过去时"was sharp"，应使用现在时"shop"。另外，"shop"作为动词时应使用动名词形式"shopping"表示购物这件事。

× I don't want to make this to make me uh, what should the two buy and uh, what is not to buy?

✓ I don't want to make this to make me confused about what I should buy and what I should not buy.

原句中"what should the two buy"和"what is not to buy"表达不清，且"the two"用法错误，应改为"what I should buy"和"what I should not buy"，使句子更通顺。

× Yes, when I was work I usually make a list, it can help me what is the important thing to do and the next step what should I do it make me more effective more quickly to complete my work.

✓ Yes, when I work I usually make a list; it can help me know what the important things to do are and what the next step is. It makes me more effective and quicker to complete my work.

"when I was work"时态错误，应为"when I work"。句子结构混乱，缺少连接词，需拆分并调整语序，使表达清晰。

× Well, I think some people don't like make a list to do things because they think a lifestyle is freedom and they didn't want to plan some things.

✓ Well, I think some people don't like to make a list to do things because they think lifestyle is freedom and they don't want to plan some things.

"don't like make"应为"don't like to make"，动词不定式用法错误。"a lifestyle"前的冠词不必要，应去掉。时态应保持一致，"didn't want"改为"don't want"。

× I like make a list on my phone because it's convenience and the phone is easy to carry out with me.

✓ I like to make a list on my phone because it's convenient and the phone is easy to carry with me.

"like make"应为"like to make"。"convenience"是名词，需用形容词"convenient"。"carry out with me"表达错误，应为"carry with me"。

× Sometimes if I want to change some plans or change some items, it's more easily.

✓ Sometimes if I want to change some plans or items, it's easier.

"more easily"是副词比较级，句中应使用形容词比较级"easier"来修饰主语。