List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and lacks clear structure. Try to start with a direct response, then add specific reasons using linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me organize my thoughts. For example, I can plan which stores to visit and remember exactly what I need to buy, which saves me time.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about how lists help you in your work or study.

例: Sometimes I make lists for my work, especially for my study and exercise plans. This helps me keep track of what I need to do and stay organized.

提案: Your answer is too general and could be more natural. Try to give a clearer opinion and explain it with specific reasons using linking words.

例: Some people might dislike making lists because they find it difficult to organize their thoughts or don't know how to write effective lists, which can be frustrating.

提案: Your answer is good but a bit wordy and repetitive. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me organize my thoughts better. Also, it feels more personal and effective than using my phone.

× Maybe because they don't have any idea about how to create and making list and how to write it and how to organize things.

✓ Maybe because they don't have any idea about how to create and make a list and how to write it and how to organize things.

The verb 'making' is incorrectly used after 'how to' which should be followed by the base form of the verb. The correct form is 'how to make' instead of 'how to making'. Also, 'list' should be preceded by an article 'a' because it is a singular countable noun here.

× I really prefer to make a list on the paper because it makes me write everything in my mind and bring them in the paper and it makes my mind organize and I think it's a better way to write the thoughts and the plans on the paper.

✓ I really prefer to make a list on paper because it helps me write everything in my mind and put it on paper, and it helps my mind organize. I think it's a better way to write thoughts and plans on paper.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'paper' when referring to paper in general. When talking about materials or mediums in general, no article is needed. Also, 'bring them in the paper' is awkward; 'put it on paper' is more natural. Additionally, 'helps' is better than 'makes me' in this context for clarity and correctness.