List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些重复和犹豫词（如umm, uh），建议减少填充词，回答更简洁自然。同时，句子结构可以更清晰，避免冗长。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget items. This helps me save time and ensures I don't miss anything important.

提案: 回答中断且不完整，缺少具体细节和连贯性。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词使回答更流畅。

例: Yes, I make a to-do list at work because it helps me organize tasks and finish everything before leaving. For example, when my boss assigns new tasks, I add them to my list to keep track.

提案: 回答中有较多犹豫词，且句子不完整，缺乏具体例子和逻辑连接。建议使用更具体的理由和连接词，避免重复。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer flexibility and dislike being restricted. However, this can lead to confusion and disorganization in their daily tasks.

提案: 回答不完整且重复，缺少清晰的对比和理由。建议明确表达偏好，使用连贯句子并避免重复。

例: I used to write lists on paper because it was convenient, but now I prefer using my phone since it's faster and I always have it with me.

× I would like to umm, shorten the time that I go out shopping and I'll list all the things that I have to buy before I uh, go shopping and I will take.

✓ I would like to umm, shorten the time that I spend going out shopping and I'll list all the things that I have to buy before I uh, go shopping and I will take.

这里“shorten the time that I go out shopping”中的“go”应改为动名词形式“going”，因为“shorten the time”后面接动名词表示时间的持续。

× I think most people umm do not have the habit of writing a list of the things.

✓ I think most people umm do not have the habit of writing a list of things.

“a list of the things”中的“the”不必要，通常表达习惯时用泛指，去掉“the”更自然。

× Nowadays people umm, get used to write list on their phones.

✓ Nowadays people umm, get used to writing lists on their phones.

“get used to”后应接动名词形式“writing”，而不是动词原形“write”；另外“list”应为复数“lists”，表示一般习惯。