List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'he's had me identify the spec specific items.' Try to make your sentences clearer and more natural. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

例: Yes, I often make a list before shopping because it helps me identify the specific items I need. This way, I can save time and avoid forgetting anything important.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. You should directly answer the question and provide supporting details with linking words. Also, avoid awkward phrasing like 'the subject that I have to do.'

例: Yes, I make a list before studying because it helps me identify the important topics I need to focus on. This method works well as it keeps me organized and improves my study efficiency.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains repetition and awkward phrasing like 'finish completely, completely their work.' Try to use more natural expressions and avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they believe it wastes time. They prefer to rely on their memory and feel confident they can complete their work or study without a list.

提案: Your answer is brief and contains filler words like 'uh.' Try to give a more complete response with specific reasons and avoid fillers. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I prefer making lists on paper because it is easier and faster for me. Additionally, writing by hand helps me remember the tasks better compared to using my phone.

× Yes, I often make a list before going shopping 'cause he's had me identify the spec specific items that I want to buy so that I can save the time when I go shopping.

✓ Yes, I often make a list before going shopping because it helps me identify the specific items that I want to buy so that I can save time when I go shopping.

The phrase 'he's had me identify' is incorrect in this context. The student likely meant to say 'it helps me identify.' Using 'he's had me' is a misuse of the past participle form and does not fit the intended meaning. Also, 'spec specific' is redundant; 'specific' alone is correct. Additionally, 'save the time' should be 'save time' as 'time' is uncountable here.

× Just because making a list before studying has me identify the useful items that are necessary for the subject that I have to do.

✓ Just because making a list before studying helps me identify the useful items that are necessary for the subject I have to study.

The phrase 'has me identify' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'helps me identify' to express assistance. Also, 'the subject that I have to do' is awkward; 'the subject I have to study' is more appropriate. The verb 'helps' correctly conveys the intended meaning.

× I think they don't want to waste the time to make a list because they can do well and finish completely, completely their work and their study very well by themselves.

✓ I think they don't want to waste time making a list because they can do well and finish their work and studies completely by themselves.

The phrase 'waste the time to make a list' is incorrect; it should be 'waste time making a list' because 'waste time' is followed by a gerund. Also, 'finish completely, completely their work and their study very well' is awkward and repetitive; 'finish their work and studies completely' is clearer and more natural. 'Study' should be pluralized to 'studies' to match the context.

× Uh, for me, I prefer to make a list on paper because the method is, uh, easier and faster.

✓ Uh, for me, I prefer to make a list on paper because this method is easier and faster.

The phrase 'the method' is vague; replacing it with 'this method' clarifies the reference to making a list on paper. This improves clarity and correctness in pronoun use.