List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to avoid repeating words like 'and' and use correct prepositions. Also, keep your answer concise and natural by saying, for example, 'I prefer to make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the items and ensures I don't forget anything.'

例: I prefer to make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the items and ensures I don't forget anything.

提案: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say, 'Yes, I usually make a to-do list in the morning. It helps me organize my day and save time because I know exactly what tasks I need to complete.'

例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list in the morning. It helps me organize my day and save time because I know exactly what tasks I need to complete.

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words. For example, 'Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time. However, spending a little time planning can make the rest of the day easier.'

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time. However, spending a little time planning can make the rest of the day easier.

提案: Your answer is good but can be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating 'so' and use linking words. For example, 'I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it, making it easy to check my list anytime. Previously, I used paper lists, but now I find my phone more convenient.'

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it, making it easy to check my list anytime. Previously, I used paper lists, but now I find my phone more convenient.

× Yes, I prefer to make a list before going to shopping because it helps me to remember all the products and and I cannot miss product from this.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list before going shopping because it helps me to remember all the products and I cannot miss any product because of this.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'going shopping' without 'to'. Also, 'and and' is a repetition error, and 'miss product from this' is awkward; it should be 'miss any product because of this'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, I usually make A to do list in the morning for my work.

✓ Yes, I usually make a to-do list in the morning for my work.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' to correctly represent the noun phrase. Articles should be in lowercase unless at the beginning of a sentence.

× It helps me to maintain the whole day and which helps to save my time because if I make A to do list I can understand what I am doing throughout.

✓ It helps me to manage the whole day and saves my time because if I make a to-do list, I can understand what I am doing throughout the day.

The original sentence has awkward structure and unclear references. 'Maintain the whole day' is incorrect; 'manage the whole day' is better. 'and which helps' is redundant; 'and saves' is clearer. Also, 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list'. Adding 'the day' at the end clarifies the meaning.

× Because they think it's a time consuming process, but the little time you invested in this process, it will make easier for you for the throughout the day.

✓ Because they think it's a time-consuming process, but the little time you invest in this process will make things easier for you throughout the day.

'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective. 'you invested' should be 'you invest' to maintain present tense consistency. 'make easier for you for the throughout the day' is awkward; corrected to 'make things easier for you throughout the day' for clarity.

× So people do not like to plan earlier because they has so many.

✓ So people do not like to plan earlier because they have so many.

The subject 'they' requires the verb 'have' not 'has'. 'Has' is third person singular; 'have' is plural. Also, the sentence is incomplete; 'so many' what? But correction focuses on the verb agreement as per instructions.

× I like to make a list on the phone notepad because I carry my mobile phone every day so it's easier for me to check the list whenever I need it.

✓ I like to make a list on the phone's notepad because I carry my mobile phone every day, so it's easier for me to check the list whenever I need it.

'phone notepad' should be possessive 'phone's notepad' to indicate the notepad belonging to the phone. Also, a comma is added before 'so' to separate clauses properly.

× So earlier I used to make a list in the paper, but now I prefer phone.

✓ Earlier, I used to make a list on paper, but now I prefer using my phone.

'in the paper' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on paper'. Also, 'prefer phone' is incomplete; it should be 'prefer using my phone' for clarity and correctness.