List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“when I'm shop”应为“when I shop”，且“to help my to help”重复且不清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，表达更自然。

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because I tend to forget things. Making a list helps me remember everything I need to buy.

提案: 回答中逻辑不清晰，句子结构混乱，如“if you don't have, don't make a list”表达不明确。建议直接回答问题，使用清晰的句子结构，并用连接词使表达连贯。

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks better. In fact, it works very well and improves my efficiency.

提案: 回答中出现语法错误和词汇使用错误，如“The money The my reason”，且表达不流畅。建议用简洁明了的句子表达观点，避免错误。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time. They believe they can remember everything without writing it down.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇“I can I can”，且表达不够准确，如“make it down”应为“tick it off”或“mark it as done”。建议注意用词准确，避免重复。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's flexible and I can quickly add important items. Also, I can easily tick off tasks when I complete them.

× Yes, I have the habit of making a list when I'm shop because there are many things I need to remember and I usually forget it.

✓ Yes, I have the habit of making a list when I'm shopping because there are many things I need to remember and I usually forget them.

这里的动词shop需要用现在分词形式shopping来表示正在进行的动作。此外，forget后面指代复数的things，应该用复数代词them。

× So I need to make a list to help my to help.

✓ So I need to make a list to help myself.

这里的反身代词使用错误，应该用myself来表示“帮助我自己”。

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work, because if you don't have, don't make a list.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work, because if you don't have a list, you can't organize everything better.

句子中缺少宾语，且代词使用不明确，需补充a list并统一主语为you。

× I can't organize my everything better and in fact it works very well thanks to the list.

✓ I can't organize everything better and in fact it works very well thanks to the list.

my和everything不能连用，应去掉my。

× The money The my reason is that doing lists is a wasting of time and they can remember everything instead of making a list.

✓ The main reason is that making lists is a waste of time and they can remember everything instead of making a list.

句子结构混乱，money和my错误出现，应改为main reason；doing lists表达不自然，改为making lists；a wasting of time应为a waste of time。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's flexible and I can I can write the important thing in time.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's flexible and I can write important things in time.

important thing应为复数important things，表示多项重要事项。

× In addition, if I complete one, I can make it down.

✓ In addition, if I complete one, I can mark it down.

短语make it down用法错误，正确表达应为mark it down，表示标记完成。