List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more concise.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember all the important items I need to buy, preventing me from forgetting anything essential.

提案: Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons or examples, using linking words for coherence.

例: I usually don't make a list for my work, but I follow a schedule because it helps me organise my tasks efficiently and manage my time better.

提案: Reduce filler words and complete your sentences fully. Use linking words to contrast opinions and provide clear reasons with examples.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they think it wastes time; however, I believe lists make life easier by helping us know what to do next and stay organised.

提案: Avoid filler words and incomplete thoughts. Provide a clear preference with reasons and use linking words to explain your choice effectively.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me, making it more convenient than carrying paper, which I might easily lose.

× I think by making list, uh, it becomes easier for us to shop and memorize all the items that we want to buy because sometimes we forget the main and important ingredient that we have to shop and you.

✓ I think by making a list, uh, it becomes easier for us to shop and memorize all the items that we want to buy because sometimes we forget the main and important ingredients that we have to shop for.

The word 'list' is a singular countable noun and requires an article 'a' before it. Also, 'ingredient' should be plural 'ingredients' because it refers to multiple items. Additionally, the phrase 'have to shop and you' is unclear and likely a mistake; it should be 'have to shop for' to correctly use the preposition with 'shop'.

× sometimes we forget the main and important ingredient that we have to shop and you.

✓ sometimes we forget the main and important ingredients that we have to shop for.

The verb 'shop' when used with items requires the preposition 'for' to indicate what is being shopped. The original sentence missed the preposition, making it grammatically incorrect.

× because schedule, umm, makes our life more easy and we should make a timetable or a schedule, uh, for uh, doing tasks.

✓ because a schedule, umm, makes our life easier and we should make a timetable or a schedule, uh, for uh, doing tasks.

The phrase 'more easy' is incorrect; the correct comparative form of 'easy' is 'easier'. Also, 'schedule' is a countable noun and requires an article 'a' before it.

× making list make our life more easier.

✓ making a list makes our life easier.

The noun 'list' is singular and countable, so it needs the article 'a'. The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'making a list'. Also, 'more easier' is incorrect; 'easier' alone is the correct comparative form.

× making list make our life more easier.

✓ making a list makes our life easier.

The verb must agree with the singular subject; 'make' should be 'makes' for third person singular. Also, 'more easier' is incorrect; 'easier' is sufficient.