List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more natural. For example, instead of 'at avoiding forgetting anything', say 'to avoid forgetting anything'. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list to avoid forgetting important items. I usually write it on a piece of paper or on my phone, which makes shopping easier and more organized.

提案: Your answer needs grammatical corrections and clearer expression. For example, say 'I use an app on my phone to remind me of my tasks, and it sends notifications, which helps me be more productive.' Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

例: Yes, I use an app on my phone to make a list of my tasks. It sends me notifications, which helps me stay organized and be more productive.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct grammar. For example, say 'Some people prefer shopping freely without lists because they enjoy discovering new items and discounts. That's why they don't make lists.'

例: Some people prefer shopping without lists because they enjoy the freedom to explore new items and find discounts. Therefore, they don't like making lists.

提案: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer and more natural phrasing. For example, say 'I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember items better and recognize them easily.' Avoid repeating words like 'memorable memory'.

例: I usually prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember the items better and makes it easier to identify them when I see the list.

× Yes, I will always make a shopping list because it helps me remember important items at avoiding forgetting anything.

✓ Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember important items and avoid forgetting anything.

The use of 'will' here is incorrect because the sentence describes a habitual action, so the simple present tense 'always make' is appropriate. Also, 'at avoiding' is incorrect; it should be 'and avoid' to connect the two actions properly.

× Usually I make a use an app on my phone to remind my works so it sends me notification after some time and it helps me to more productive on my work.

✓ Usually I use an app on my phone to remind me of my work, so it sends me notifications after some time and helps me to be more productive in my work.

The phrase 'make a use an app' is incorrect; it should be 'use an app'. 'Remind my works' is incorrect; it should be 'remind me of my work'. 'Notification' should be plural 'notifications'. 'Helps me to more productive' needs 'to be more productive'. Also, 'on my work' should be 'in my work'.

× Because some people are prefer to shop like their own freedomness.

✓ Because some people prefer to shop with their own freedom.

The phrase 'are prefer' is incorrect; 'prefer' is a simple present verb and does not need 'are'. 'Like their own freedomness' is incorrect; 'with their own freedom' is the correct expression.

× Usually they go for shop and discovering new items and discovering the discounts at discount facilities.

✓ Usually they go shopping and discover new items and discounts at discount facilities.

'Go for shop' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. 'Discovering' should be 'discover' to maintain parallel verb forms in the sentence.

× They like it that's why they don't making leaves.

✓ They like it; that's why they don't make lists.

'Don't making' is incorrect; it should be 'don't make'. Also, 'leaves' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'lists'.

× Usually I prefer to make a list on my paper because when I write with my hands on a piece of paper, it's more memorable memory, memorable for my brain and it's helped me to identify the item when I see it.

✓ Usually I prefer to make a list on paper because when I write by hand on a piece of paper, it's more memorable for my brain and it helps me to identify the item when I see it.

'Make a list on my paper' is incorrect; it should be 'on paper'. 'Write with my hands' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'write by hand'. 'More memorable memory' is redundant; 'more memorable' suffices. 'It's helped me' should be 'it helps me' to maintain present tense consistency.