List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在重复词汇和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议减少重复，使用更自然的表达方式，并且句子结构更完整。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me avoid forgetting items. However, I try not to make lists too often to keep things flexible.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和结构，避免口头语，表达更具体的细节。

例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me manage my time effectively. However, sometimes I feel stressed when I have too many tasks to complete.

提案: 回答表达混乱，语法和用词错误较多。建议理清思路，使用连贯的句子表达原因，并避免重复和口头语。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it adds pressure. However, without lists, it might be hard to complete tasks on time.

提案: 回答不完整且有语法错误。建议完整表达观点，避免口头语，并提供具体理由支持选择。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient to carry and easy to edit whenever I need.

× making a list is a good way to avoid avoid the mistakes

✓ making a list is a good way to avoid mistakes

这里的“the mistakes”使用了定冠词“the”，但在此处泛指错误时不需要定冠词，应该用复数形式“mistakes”表示一般错误。

× I'm always easy to forget anything

✓ I always easily forget anything

“I'm always easy to forget anything”中“easy”用法错误，应该用副词“easily”修饰动词“forget”，且主语应为“I”，表达“我总是容易忘记任何东西”。

× I think I will reduce the the times that I make list

✓ I think I will reduce the number of times that I make lists

“times”前应加“number of”表示次数，且“list”应为复数“lists”，因为指多次制作清单。

× making this is a good way to, uh, managing my time

✓ making this is a good way to manage my time

“to”后应接动词原形“manage”，而不是动名词“managing”。

× it is also a convenient way that I can do my works, uh, little by little

✓ it is also a convenient way that I can do my work, uh, little by little

“work”作为不可数名词时不加复数形式“works”，此处应使用单数形式。

× sometimes maybe I always under pressure, you know, deeply

✓ sometimes maybe I am always under pressure, you know, deeply

“under pressure”前缺少系动词“am”，使句子完整。

× making this is a real easy way that can makes people under pressure

✓ making this is a really easy way that can make people feel under pressure

“can makes”中“makes”应为原形“make”，且“under pressure”前应加动词“feel”使表达完整。

× if we don't make list, I think we can't finish something on time

✓ if we don't make lists, I think we can't finish something on time

“list”应为复数“lists”，因为指多次制作清单。

× making a list on my phone is easy to

✓ making a list on my phone is easy too

“easy to”应为“easy too”，表示“也很容易”，“too”表示“也”。