List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi sai như 'when I shopping'. Bạn nên nói rõ hơn về lý do tại sao bạn thích làm danh sách và tránh câu trả lời quá ngắn hoặc không hoàn chỉnh.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc và giải thích cụ thể hơn về cách danh sách giúp bạn làm việc hiệu quả.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks better. As a result, I can complete my responsibilities more efficiently.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to live spontaneously and enjoy the freedom of making decisions on the spot.

提案: Bạn cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy giải thích lý do bạn thích làm danh sách trên giấy và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

例: I prefer to make a list on paper because I enjoy crossing off items, which helps me remember what I need better.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I shopping because it helps me ensure I don't forget anything important and I love.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I am shopping because it helps me ensure I don't forget anything important and I love it.

The verb 'shopping' needs to be in the present participle form with the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense 'I am shopping'. Also, 'I love' is incomplete and should be 'I love it' to complete the sentence.

× Yes, I make a list for my work because it's helped me productivity of my task and more efficiently when I complete it my responsibility.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me be more productive with my tasks and complete my responsibilities more efficiently.

The phrase 'it's helped me productivity' is incorrect; 'helps me be more productive' is the correct present tense form. Also, 'complete it my responsibility' is incorrect; it should be 'complete my responsibilities'. The sentence should be in present tense to match the context.

× Yes, I make a list for my work because it's helped me productivity of my task and more efficiently when I complete it my responsibility.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me be more productive with my tasks and complete my responsibilities more efficiently.

The preposition 'of' after 'productivity' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'with' as in 'productive with my tasks'. Also, 'complete it my responsibility' misuses prepositions and articles; it should be 'complete my responsibilities'.

× Yes, I make a list for my work because it's helped me productivity of my task and more efficiently when I complete it my responsibility.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me be more productive with my tasks and complete my responsibilities more efficiently.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used before 'my responsibility'. It should be omitted to correctly say 'complete my responsibilities'.

× Oh, I think many people refer the making list. You care. They like the freedom of this life and they often choose spontaneous and flexible that make a lot.

✓ Oh, I think many people avoid making lists. You know, they like the freedom in life and often choose to be spontaneous and flexible, which makes a lot of difference.

The phrase 'refer the making list' is incorrect; 'avoid making lists' is correct. 'You care' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'You know'. 'Choose spontaneous and flexible' is incorrect; it should be 'choose to be spontaneous and flexible'. 'That make a lot' is incomplete and unclear; 'which makes a lot of difference' clarifies the meaning.

× Oh, I think many people refer the making list. You care. They like the freedom of this life and they often choose spontaneous and flexible that make a lot.

✓ Oh, I think many people avoid making lists. You know, they like the freedom in life and often choose to be spontaneous and flexible, which makes a lot of difference.

The preposition 'of' in 'freedom of this life' is better expressed as 'freedom in life'. Also, 'choose spontaneous and flexible' lacks the preposition 'to be' before adjectives.

× Everything make a list on paper because I love by Ross the item on their list and it's helped me remember better anything I need.

✓ I always make a list on paper because I love to cross off the items on my list and it helps me remember better anything I need.

'Everything make a list' is incorrect; the subject should be 'I'. 'I love by Ross the item' is incorrect; it should be 'I love to cross off the items'. 'Their list' should be 'my list' to match the speaker. 'It's helped me' should be 'it helps me' to maintain present tense.

× Everything make a list on paper because I love by Ross the item on their list and it's helped me remember better anything I need.

✓ I always make a list on paper because I love crossing off the items on my list and it helps me remember better anything I need.

The phrase 'I love by Ross' is incorrect; it should be 'I love crossing off' using the gerund form after 'love'. This correctly expresses the action enjoyed by the speaker.