List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有些内容与问题无关，比如提到MBTI测试和性取向，导致回答不够自然且偏离主题。建议直接回答是否做购物清单，并说明原因或习惯，避免冗余。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to help me remember what I need. However, sometimes I buy extra items that are not on the list if I find something interesting.

提案: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议简洁明了地说明是否做工作清单，并具体描述清单如何帮助你完成工作。

例: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work every day. It helps me stay organized and finish tasks on time. When I complete a task, I check it off, which gives me a sense of achievement.

提案: 回答内容较好，但表达稍显重复和啰嗦。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并用更具体的词汇表达观点。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find them difficult to follow, which can cause stress. They may feel more comfortable working freely without restrictions.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，影响自然流畅。建议简洁表达偏好，并说明原因，避免不完整句子。

例: I prefer making lists on paper because physically crossing off tasks gives me a sense of accomplishment. Using my phone can be distracting because I might watch videos instead.

× Yes I do asked the MBTI test, said I am a gay man.

✓ Yes, I did the MBTI test, which said I am a gay man.

这里的动词时态错误，'asked' 应该用过去式 'did' 来表示完成的动作，且句子结构需要调整以表达正确的意思。

× I usually make a list to do when I go to everywhere.

✓ I usually make a to-do list when I go everywhere.

'go to everywhere' 中 'to' 是多余的，'everywhere' 本身表示地点，不需要介词。

× However when I shopping although I have a list, I will also buy something else out of the list but I will down the list.

✓ However, when I am shopping, although I have a list, I will also buy something else not on the list, but I will follow the list.

'when I shopping' 缺少助动词 'am'，'out of the list' 应改为 'not on the list'，'will down the list' 表达不清，应改为 'will follow the list'。

× When I was a child I used A to do list to finish my today's work and I can when I put every ticket on the blank box I can put it away and go to the dining room to watch TV and I love it.

✓ When I was a child, I used a to-do list to finish my work for the day. When I put every ticket in the blank box, I could put it away and go to the dining room to watch TV, and I loved it.

时态不一致，'can' 应改为过去式 'could'，句子需要拆分以提高清晰度。

× From my point of view, I think that those people think making a list is too hard for them to follow it and it will make them feel stressful to do the job.

✓ From my point of view, I think that those people find making a list too hard to follow, and it makes them feel stressed when doing the job.

'feel stressful' 应改为 'feel stressed'，且句子结构需要调整使表达更自然。

× Maybe without a list they will finish their job better than with the To Do List that will restrict them.

✓ Maybe without a list, they will finish their job better than with a to-do list that restricts them.

'the To Do List' 应改为不定冠词 'a to-do list'，且动词 'will restrict' 应改为一般现在时 'restricts'，因为这是一个普遍事实。

× I prefer to make a list on paper because when I put the tickets on every blank place I said on the paper, I can feel a lot of achievements and when I use my phone maybe I will just surfing my video and that's.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because when I put the tickets on every blank space I drew on the paper, I can feel a lot of achievement. When I use my phone, maybe I will just surf videos, and that's it.

'blank place I said on the paper' 应为 'blank space I drew on the paper'，'surfing my video' 应改为 'surf videos'，句子需要分开以提高清晰度。