List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lặp lại và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như "uh" và cải thiện cấu trúc câu để tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt với cấu trúc rõ ràng và ví dụ cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, hãy chú ý viết đúng chính tả như "a to-do list" và sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I make a to-do list every day because it helps me remember important tasks and stay organized. For instance, by preparing my list in advance, I can prioritize my work effectively.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như "uh" và giải thích rõ hơn ý tưởng của mình với từ vựng phù hợp.

例: I believe some people dislike making lists because they feel it takes too much time, and they prefer to do things spontaneously.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi như "When I'm go hang out" và sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc.

例: It depends on the situation. When I go out, I prefer to make a list on my phone, but when I'm at home with more time, I like to write it down on paper.

× Definitely yes. Uh, making a list is one of my routine and when I'm going out like shopping, I usually make a list.

✓ Definitely yes. Uh, making a list is one of my routines and when I go out shopping, I usually make a list.

The word 'routine' should be plural 'routines' because it refers to one of multiple habits. Also, 'when I'm going out like shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'when I go out shopping' to use the correct verb form and preposition for habitual action.

× I make A to do list every day because it helps me remember important tasks and stay organised.

✓ I make a to-do list every day because it helps me remember important tasks and stay organised.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' because it is a compound noun.

× I think, uh, some people don't have enough time to make a retail list and I think they want to do everything by nature way.

✓ I think, uh, some people don't have enough time to make a shopping list and I think they want to do everything in a natural way.

The phrase 'retail list' is incorrect; 'shopping list' is the correct term. Also, 'by nature way' should be 'in a natural way' to use the correct preposition and adjective form.

× Well, it really depends on my case. When I'm go hang out, I choose make a list on my phone, my smartphone or iPod.

✓ Well, it really depends on my case. When I go hang out, I choose to make a list on my phone, my smartphone, or iPod.

The phrase 'When I'm go hang out' is incorrect; it should be 'When I go hang out' to use the correct present tense. Also, 'I choose make a list' should be 'I choose to make a list' to include the infinitive form after 'choose'.

× But when I have time and I stay at home I choose make a list on paper.

✓ But when I have time and I stay at home, I choose to make a list on paper.

After 'choose', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to make'. Also, a comma is needed after 'at home' for clarity.