List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but has some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words and use more natural phrasing. Also, add a linking phrase to make your answer more coherent.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because otherwise, I tend to forget some items.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical mistakes and some unclear phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct verb tenses for clarity.

例: Yes, I make a list of tasks I want to complete at work, and it helps me a lot because sometimes I forget what I need to do.

提案: Your answer is somewhat vague and lacks clear structure. Try to organise your ideas logically using linking words and provide more specific reasons.

例: Some people might not like making lists because they have a good memory and don't forget things, or they find making lists time-consuming and prefer to work more flexibly.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has some awkward phrasing and minor grammar errors. Use clearer expressions and linking words to improve coherence.

例: I prefer making lists on paper because I like to write down each point clearly, and once I finish a task, I can tick it off. Therefore, I feel more comfortable using paper than my phone.

× I I make a list when I shop otherwise I will forget the things.

✓ I make a list when I shop; otherwise, I forget the things.

The sentence incorrectly mixes present tense with future tense ('will forget'). Since the action is habitual, present simple tense should be used consistently. Also, 'the things' is vague; 'things' without 'the' is more natural here.

× sometimes I forgot the things uh that I have to do in work.

✓ sometimes I forget the things that I have to do at work.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense, but the context requires present tense 'forget' to indicate habitual action. Also, 'in work' should be 'at work' as the correct preposition for workplace.

× Maybe some people don't like making lists or otherwise they didn't forget things, or they can save their time by avoiding making lists and maybe they are more comfortable with.

✓ Maybe some people don't like making lists, or otherwise they don't forget things, or they can save time by avoiding making lists, and maybe they are more comfortable that way.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'didn't forget' where present tense 'don't forget' is appropriate for general statements. Also, 'save their time' should be 'save time' as 'time' is uncountable here. The phrase 'more comfortable with' is incomplete and needs clarification.

× I prefer making list on paper because I like to write it down point wisely and when I finish it I will just stick it.

✓ I prefer making lists on paper because I like to write them down point-wise, and when I finish, I just stick them up.

The phrase 'making list on paper' should be 'making lists on paper' (plural). 'Point wisely' is incorrect; the correct adverb is 'point-wise'. Also, 'stick it' is vague; 'stick them up' is clearer for attaching lists.

× I prefer making list on paper because I like to write it down point wisely and when I finish it I will just stick it.

✓ I prefer making lists on paper because I like to write them down point-wise, and when I finish, I just stick them up.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the context of making multiple lists. Pronouns 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural noun.