List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较自然，但句子较长且有些重复，建议简化表达，避免冗余，同时使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to choose items spontaneously. For example, I pick things that catch my attention or that I suddenly remember I need.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I think making a list at work is useful; however, I usually don't do it because I tend to be lazy.

提案: 回答不完整且含糊，缺少具体细节。建议补充完整句子，提供具体原因，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to work instinctively. They like to follow ideas that come to them naturally rather than planning everything in advance.

提案: 回答较好，但“newspaper”用词不当，应为“paper”。建议注意用词准确，并适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient and efficient than using paper. For instance, I can easily add or remove items without carrying anything extra.

× No, I don't make lists when I go shopping and I prefer a more spontaneous way.

✓ No, I don't make lists when I go shopping and I prefer a more spontaneous way.

该句中没有明显的单复数错误，lists使用正确。此句无需修改。

× When I'm in a supermarket or in a shopping mall, I usually select items that come to my mind naturally and catch my attention or just where I suddenly remember that I need.

✓ When I'm in a supermarket or a shopping mall, I usually select items that come to my mind naturally and catch my attention, or just those I suddenly remember that I need.

原句中“or just where I suddenly remember that I need”结构不完整，缺少主语，导致句子结构错误。应改为“or just those I suddenly remember that I need”，使句子结构完整，表达清晰。

× I do think that making a list during my work can be useful, but because I'm a lazy person so I usually don't make lists during work during working.

✓ I do think that making a list during my work can be useful, but because I'm a lazy person, I usually don't make lists while working.

原句中“but because... so”结构重复且冗余，且“during work during working”重复且不自然。应去掉“so”，并将“during work during working”改为“while working”，使句子结构更简洁自然。

× I think that is because they are. They prefer a more instinctive way to work and they like to work with some ideas that come up naturally.

✓ I think that is because they are. They prefer a more instinctive way to work and like to work with ideas that come up naturally.

原句中“they like to work with some ideas”中“some”可省略使表达更自然，且“they like to work”重复主语和谓语，简化为“and like to work”更流畅。

× I prefer to make it on my phone because it is much more convenient and efficient than making it on the newspaper.

✓ I prefer to make it on my phone because it is much more convenient and efficient than making it on paper.

“on the newspaper”用法不当，通常表达“在纸上”应使用“on paper”，而不是“on the newspaper”。“newspaper”指报纸，语境不符。