List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and is somewhat unclear. Try to use the present simple tense for habitual actions and keep your sentences concise and natural. For example, say 'Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping.'

例: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping to ensure I don't forget anything important.

提案: Your answer is short and lacks detail. Try to provide a reason and use the present simple tense for habitual actions. For example, 'No, I don't usually make lists for work because I prefer to keep things in my head.'

例: No, I don't usually make lists for work because I prefer to keep things in my head and it works well for me.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear reason with supporting details and use linking words. For example, 'Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and find planning restrictive.'

例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and find planning restrictive, so they avoid making lists.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and is a bit repetitive. Use the present simple tense and link your ideas clearly. For example, 'I prefer to make my list on my phone because I always have it with me, whereas paper lists can be easily lost.'

例: I prefer to make my list on my phone because I always have it with me, whereas paper lists can be easily lost or forgotten.

× Yes, I will be make a list when I will be go to shop.

✓ Yes, I will make a list when I go shopping.

The modal verb 'will' should be followed by the base form of the verb without 'be'. Also, 'will be go' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go'. Additionally, 'go to shop' should be 'go shopping' to sound natural in English.

× No, I will not make a list for my work.

✓ No, I do not make a list for my work.

The question is in the present tense ('Do you make a list?'), so the answer should also be in the present tense. Using 'will not make' implies future tense, which is inconsistent here.

× Because some people have no planning, that's why.

✓ Because some people do not plan, that's why.

'Have no planning' is incorrect; 'plan' is a verb and should be used properly. Also, 'that's why' is redundant after 'because'. It's better to say 'Because some people do not plan.'

× It's not a make up list, that's why.

✓ It's not a made-up list, that's why.

'Make up' should be in the past participle form 'made-up' when used as an adjective before a noun. Also, 'that's why' is redundant after 'It's not a made-up list.'

× I will be make my list on my phone because phone is never forgot then paper is sometime is forgotten that's why I will be making my list in my phone.

✓ I make my list on my phone because the phone is never forgotten, but paper is sometimes forgotten; that's why I make my list on my phone.

'Will be make' and 'will be making' are incorrect modal verb constructions; use simple present tense 'make' to express habitual actions. Also, 'phone is never forgot' should be 'the phone is never forgotten' (passive form). 'Sometime is forgotten' should be 'sometimes forgotten'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.