List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha doğal ve akıcı bir cevap için cümlenizi sadeleştirin ve gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın. Ayrıca, neden liste yapmayı sevdiğinizi daha açık ve spesifik şekilde ifade edin.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay focused and ensures I don't forget anything important.

提案: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam belirsizliği var. Daha net ve doğru cümle yapıları kullanarak doğrudan soruya cevap verin. Ayrıca, gelecekte liste yapma alışkanlığınız hakkında daha açık bir ifade kullanabilirsiniz.

例: I don't have a job at the moment, so I don't make work lists. However, if I had a job, I would definitely use lists to organize my tasks.

提案: Cevabınızda anlam karışıklığı ve tekrarlar mevcut. Daha açık ve mantıklı cümlelerle neden bazı insanların liste yapmayı sevmediğini açıklayın. Ayrıca, düşüncelerinizi destekleyecek spesifik nedenler verin.

例: Some people might find making lists difficult or time-consuming, so they prefer to remember tasks without writing them down.

提案: Cevabınızda cümle yapısı karışık ve tekrarlar var. Tercihinizi net bir şekilde ifade edin ve nedenlerini açıkça belirtin. Ayrıca, iki seçeneği karşılaştırarak daha tutarlı bir cevap verin.

例: I prefer making lists both on paper and on my phone because paper feels more personal, but my phone is convenient and always with me.

× I like, I like to make a list when I shop because it's not much easier to focus on my shopping and that's why I like it.

✓ I like to make a list when I shop because it's much easier to focus on my shopping and that's why I like it.

The phrase 'not much easier' is incorrect here; it should be 'much easier' to correctly express that making a list helps focus shopping. The error is related to the use of the present tense and adverb placement affecting meaning.

× Actually I don't have a job, so I do not make a list for my work and I think if I had at work I'd like to make a list for my work.

✓ Actually, I don't have a job, so I do not make a list for my work, but I think if I had a job, I'd like to make a list for my work.

The phrase 'if I had at work' is incorrect; it should be 'if I had a job'. Also, the conjunction 'and' should be replaced with 'but' to correctly contrast the ideas. This is a modal verb and sentence structure issue.

× Maybe they think that it's much difficult to make a list, make it to make a list and do shopping, or to do lists, just some to delete to do lists.

✓ Maybe they think that it's very difficult to make a list, to make a list and do shopping, or to do lists, or just to delete to-do lists.

The phrase 'much difficult' is incorrect; 'very difficult' is the correct form. Also, the sentence is somewhat unclear and repetitive; clarifying and correcting the adverb usage improves comprehension.

× I like to prepare my to make my list on paper and on my phone.

✓ I like to prepare my list on paper and on my phone.

The phrase 'to prepare my to make my list' is incorrect and redundant. Removing 'to make my' corrects the prepositional phrase and improves sentence clarity.