List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和语法错误。

例: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously.

提案: 表达不够连贯，语法和用词错误较多。建议使用简单句子清楚表达观点，并适当使用连接词。

例: No, I don't make lists for my work because I find it hard to follow them and meet deadlines.

提案: 回答内容不完整且表达混乱，缺乏具体细节。建议明确表达观点，并用具体理由支持。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it limits their freedom and they prefer to be spontaneous.

提案: 表达较为简单且有语法错误，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I don't have to carry paper around.

× No, I have I haven't this hobby to make lips when I shopping or do other work, but because I more tend to to to buy things at my will and it can and I.

✓ No, I don't have this hobby to make lists when I shop or do other work, because I tend to buy things at my will.

句中'lips'应为'lists'，且'have I haven't'结构错误，应为'don't have'。shopping前缺少动词形式，应为'shop'。句子中多余重复词汇需删除。整体应使用复数形式'lists'，因为通常购物时会列多个项目。

× No, I have I haven't this hobby to make lips when I shopping or do other work, but because I more tend to to to buy things at my will and it can and I.

✓ No, I don't have this hobby to make lists when I shop or do other work, because I tend to buy things at my will.

shopping前应使用动词原形shop，因为此处是一般现在时的陈述句，不能用动名词形式。

× No, no list can work for me because I'm not because I realize that I can't follow any list and deadline I write down in my plans.

✓ No, no list can work for me because I realize that I can't follow any list or deadline I write down in my plans.

句中'list and deadline'应使用并列连词'or'连接，且'deadline'应为单数或复数形式保持一致。

× No, no list can work for me because I'm not because I realize that I can't follow any list and deadline I write down in my plans.

✓ No, no list can work for me because I realize that I can't follow any list or deadline I write down in my plans.

句中重复使用'because'导致句子结构混乱，应删除多余的'because'。

× But they say the common phenomenon that people don't like making this, it has some philosophical roots.

✓ But they say the common phenomenon that people don't like making lists has some philosophical roots.

句子中'this'指代不明，应改为'lists'，且句子结构应调整为主谓一致，去掉多余的'it'。

× If we can do as our expectation, that means our expectation can can previous the reality.

✓ If we can do as we expect, that means our expectation can precede reality.

'our expectation'前缺少冠词，且'previous'用法错误，应为动词'precede'。'can can'重复，应删除一个。

× If we can do as our expectation, that means our expectation can can previous the reality.

✓ If we can do as we expect, that means our expectation can precede reality.

'do as our expectation'中应为'do as we expect'，'do as'后接动词短语。

× You know, paper is not so common in our daily life and we really don't like to read down some words on on it.

✓ You know, paper is not so common in our daily life and we really don't like to write down words on it.

'read down some words'表达错误，应为'write down words'。'some words'可简化为'words'。

× You know, paper is not so common in our daily life and we really don't like to read down some words on on it.

✓ You know, paper is not so common in our daily life and we really don't like to write down words on it.

'read down'是错误搭配，应为'write down'，且'on on'重复，应删除一个。

× And the paper also is is really busy.

✓ And paper is also really inconvenient.

'busy'用来形容纸张不合适，应使用'inconvenient'或其他合适形容词。'is is'重复，应删除一个。