List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Yeah, I usually have a shopping list to help me remember what I need. However, something I just don't really follow the specific list. I want to pick the food based on my mood that day, for example like a tomato or other fresh produce. This way shopping make me feel more relaxed.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Well, of course and I need to do that because many work needs to reach a specific determination. That is why I need to do some timetable for that. This is also can be seen as a list. If I don't finish the specific goals in that day, I need to review it and to.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
It's really hard to say because I think people don't make it. It's because they don't really figure out what they wanna do or what they wanna get, so they don't have a clear timetable or schedule to finish that.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
Well, I use both of them, but I prefer paper because papers can help me organize my thought clearly. However, if I use my phone, I always be distracted by other things, for example some applications, information, something like that.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 75.0提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构和用词有些不自然，且部分表达重复。建议简化句子，使用更准确的词汇，并注意语法，如动词单复数一致。
例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to remember what I need. However, I sometimes choose items based on my mood, like fresh tomatoes or other produce. This makes shopping more enjoyable and relaxing.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子不够连贯。建议使用更准确的表达，避免模糊词汇，并用连接词使句子更流畅。
例: Yes, I always make a list or timetable for my work because many tasks have specific deadlines. If I don't complete my goals for the day, I review and adjust my plan accordingly.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中有口语化表达和语法错误，且逻辑连接不够清晰。建议使用正式表达，明确原因，并用连接词增强逻辑性。
例: I think some people dislike making lists because they are unsure about their goals. Without clear objectives, they find it difficult to create a timetable or schedule.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不准确。建议注意动词时态和单复数，使用更具体的词汇，并保持句子简洁。
例: I use both paper and my phone for lists, but I prefer paper because it helps me organize my thoughts clearly. Using my phone can be distracting due to notifications and apps.
文法
× This way shopping make me feel more relaxed.
✓ This way shopping makes me feel more relaxed.
主语是单数名词'shopping'，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'makes'，而不是'make'。
× many work needs to reach a specific determination.
✓ much work needs to reach a specific determination.
'work'是不可数名词，不能用复数限定词'many'，应使用不可数限定词'much'。
× I need to do some timetable for that.
✓ I need to make a timetable for that.
动词'do'不适用于'timetable'，应使用'make'表示制定时间表。
× This is also can be seen as a list.
✓ This can also be seen as a list.
助动词'can'后不应插入副词'too'，正确位置是'can also'。
× If I don't finish the specific goals in that day, I need to review it and to.
✓ If I don't finish the specific goals that day, I need to review them too.
'goals'是复数，代词应使用'them'，且'to'应为'too'表示'也'。
× It's because they don't really figure out what they wanna do or what they wanna get, so they don't have a clear timetable or schedule to finish that.
✓ It's because they don't really figure out what they want to do or what they want to get, so they don't have a clear timetable or schedule to finish it.
口语缩写'wanna'应改为正式表达'want to'，代词'that'指代不明确，应改为'it'。
× if I use my phone, I always be distracted by other things, for example some applications, information, something like that.
✓ if I use my phone, I am always distracted by other things, for example some applications, information, something like that.
动词'be'应使用正确时态' am'，构成被动语态' am distracted'。
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