List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“avoid forget anything”应为“avoid forgetting anything”，且表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意语法正确。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list to avoid forgetting anything and to stick to my budget.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，如“can makes me clear”应为“helps me stay organized”，且句子不完整。建议使用完整句子，表达更清晰自然。

例: Yes, as a student, I make lists for my assignments, including due dates and guidelines. This helps me stay organized and complete tasks on time.

提案: 回答表达混乱，语法和逻辑不清晰。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted by schedules and prefer to do tasks in a more flexible way.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，如“make list on my Cos”不清楚。建议使用完整句子，表达更自然流畅。

例: I usually make lists on my phone because there are apps that help me organize them clearly and easily. Plus, I can take my phone anywhere, so I won't forget the list like I might with paper.

× Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping to avoid forget anything and ensure my budget.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping to avoid forgetting anything and ensure my budget.

动词avoid后应接动名词形式forgetting，而不是动词原形forget。避免动词后接错误形式是英语中的常见语法规则。

× Yes, but I'm currently a student. I'll make this for my assignments and list all the due dates and guidelines. It can makes me clear and I can do everything along the.

✓ Yes, but I'm currently a student. I'll make this for my assignments and list all the due dates and guidelines. It can make me clear and I can do everything along the way.

情态动词can后应接动词原形make，而不是makes。makes是第三人称单数形式，不适用于can后。

× I think they don't make lists because they don't like the feelings of stricted into a schedule 'cause someone's like doing one thing part of this thing and then do part of another thing if make a list may.

✓ I think they don't make lists because they don't like the feeling of being restricted into a schedule, because some people like doing one part of one thing and then part of another thing, so making a list may not suit them.

原句结构混乱，语法错误较多。需要调整句子结构，使用正确的词形（如being restricted），并补充缺失的词语，使句子通顺且符合语法规则。

× I usually make list on my Cos there's some apps can help you make list and it's clear and easy.

✓ I usually make lists on my phone because there are some apps that can help you make lists and they're clear and easy to use.

介词on后应接具体名词，原句中my后缺少名词phone，且because拼写错误为Cos。需要补充完整并修正拼写。

× I usually make list on my Cos there's some apps can help you make list and it's clear and easy.

✓ I usually make lists on my phone because there are some apps that can help you make lists and they're clear and easy to use.

list应使用复数形式lists，因为表达的是一般习惯性行为，且与复数apps对应。

× You can take it everywhere. If I make list on the paper I might forget it in somewhere so it's easier for me to use my phone to make list.

✓ You can take it everywhere. If I make a list on paper, I might forget it somewhere, so it's easier for me to use my phone to make lists.

介词in后不应接somewhere，somewhere本身表示地点，不需要介词。paper前应加冠词a，list应为复数lists以保持一致。