List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は自然な英語表現ではなく、文法的な誤りが多いです。また、内容が曖昧で具体性に欠けています。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけ、文法の基本を見直しましょう。

例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I enjoy shopping spontaneously without planning.

提案: 回答は意味が伝わりにくく、文法や語彙の誤用があります。具体的な理由を明確に述べ、論理的に繋げる表現を練習しましょう。

例: Yes, I usually make a work plan because it helps me see the big picture and manage my time effectively.

提案: 回答が非常に短く、内容が不十分です。理由を具体的に述べ、文法的に正しい文章を作る練習が必要です。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it bothersome and time-consuming.

提案: 回答はやや繰り返しがあり、流暢さに欠けます。理由を明確に述べ、簡潔で自然な表現を心がけましょう。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can access them anytime and it's very convenient.

× I like to shopping.

✓ I like shopping.

'Like' is followed by the gerund form of the verb, so 'shopping' should be used instead of 'to shopping'.

× I like to go shopping to not to make plan, just feeling.

✓ I like to go shopping without making a plan, just following my feelings.

The phrase 'to not to make plan' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'without making a plan'. Also, 'just feeling' should be 'just following my feelings' for clarity.

× I usually make a plan to walk.

✓ I usually make a plan to follow.

The phrase 'make a plan to walk' is unclear. It seems the student means to 'make a plan to follow' or 'make a plan to stick to'. 'To walk' is likely a mistranslation or misuse.

× It is because to make plan is good for me to look up, look up the overall and I can manage my time.

✓ It is because making a plan is good for me to look at the overall picture and I can manage my time.

The phrase 'to make plan' should be 'making a plan'. 'Look up, look up the overall' is unclear; 'look at the overall picture' is more natural.

× It is bother them, it is take time.

✓ It bothers them, it takes time.

The verbs should agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'Bother' should be 'bothers' and 'take' should be 'takes'.

× It takes time and yeah.

✓ It takes time, yeah.

Adding a comma before 'yeah' improves the sentence flow.

× I prefer to make a plan on my phone because I can, I can. Re. I can see the plan at any time I want, so yeah.

✓ I prefer to make a plan on my phone because I can see the plan at any time I want, so yeah.

The repeated 'I can, I can. Re.' is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity.