List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer does not address the question and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear statement about your own habits, using correct grammar.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need.

提案: Your response is unclear and does not answer the question. Focus on answering whether you make lists for work and if they are effective, using complete sentences.

例: Yes, I often make lists for my work, and they help me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently.

提案: Your answer repeats the question and is incomplete. Provide a clear opinion with reasons why some people might dislike making lists.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally.

提案: You repeated the question instead of answering it. Give a clear preference and explain why you prefer one method over the other.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily edit them anytime.

× Did you make a list on your shop?

✓ Do you make a list when you shop?

The question is about a habitual action, so the present tense 'do you make' is appropriate instead of the past tense 'did you make'. Also, 'on your shop' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'when you shop'. Use present tense for habitual actions.

× Did you make a noise for the work? Does this work?

✓ Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

The question is about a current habit, so present tense 'do you make' is correct instead of past tense 'did you make'. Also, 'make a noise' is incorrect in this context; the correct phrase is 'make a list'. 'Does it work?' is correct to ask if the list is effective.

× Why don't some people like making this?

✓ Why don't some people like making lists?

The pronoun 'this' is vague and incorrect here. The question refers to 'making lists', so the noun 'lists' should be used instead of 'this'. Use specific nouns rather than vague pronouns for clarity.