List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ слишком короткий и неестественный. Следует использовать полные предложения и объяснять, почему вы делаете список, чтобы ответ был более содержательным и естественным.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и неясен. Следует использовать правильные формы глаголов и объяснять причины, почему вы не делаете список для работы.

例: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I prefer to keep things in my mind, but sometimes I write notes if the tasks are many.

提案: Ответ не имеет смысла и не раскрывает тему. Следует объяснить возможные причины, почему люди не любят составлять списки, используя связные предложения.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or they prefer to be spontaneous rather than plan everything.

提案: Ответ неясен и содержит ошибку в словоупотреблении. Следует четко выразить предпочтение и объяснить, почему вы выбираете тот или иной способ.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I can easily edit or add items anytime.

× No, I does not make it.

✓ No, I do not make it.

The auxiliary verb 'does' is incorrectly used with the first person singular subject 'I'. The correct form is 'do' for 'I' in the present tense negative form. Use 'do not' instead of 'does not' with 'I'.

× I do not love to make it.

✓ I do not like to make it.

The verb 'love' is not typically used with 'do not' in this context to express dislike. 'Like' is more appropriate to express preference or habit. 'Love' is stronger and usually affirmative.

× I think because they want to.

✓ I think it's because they don't want to.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'it's' and negating 'want' clarifies the reason why some people don't like making lists.

× Identical.

✓ Both are the same.

The word 'Identical' alone is not a complete sentence and does not clearly answer the question. A complete sentence clarifies the meaning.

× I prefer to list on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.

The verb 'list' is incorrectly used as a verb here. The correct phrase is 'make a list' to express the action of creating a list.